Playing with words/48

Playing with words/48
Message de here4u posté le 08-10-2023 à 12:16:25 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!

Voici votre nouveau challenge ! "Playing and working with words"... La date limite pour cet exercice est fin octobre 2023.
Je vous rappelle que cet exercice a des règles qui doivent être respectées. Lisez-les bien si vous ne les connaissez pas ! Ce travail est loin d'être un jeu... mais il peut être très ludique... Il vous laisse également toute liberté de choisir votre thème!

Using THE 8 WORDS given below (the 2 verbs can be put in whatever tenses or forms you fancy but MUST remain verbs!), 2 adjectives or adverbs, 2 nouns and 2 link words, + a given structure and the suitable punctuation, search your minds, think hard and create AN ONLY meaningful SENTENCE. "Easy", isn't it? (In fact, it's more easily said than done and advanced learners or natives can step in!! )

- You CANNOT change the nature of the words!
- You CANNOT use two or more compulsory words consecutively!

PLEASE, WHEN YOU WRITE YOUR SENTENCE, PUT CAPITALS TO THE GIVEN WORDS! [and specify the number of words at the end.]

Je vous rappelle qu'« une phrase », une seule, se termine par un point [final, d'exclamation ou d'interrogation], peut avoir de la ponctuation interne ",/; /:/ [...], et qu'elle doit avant tout avoir un sens. (Il ne doit y avoir qu'UN SEUL POINT dans votre phrase - à la fin.) Le but ultime est de faire une seule phrase complexe, mais courte... Je le répète : elle doit avoir un sens et sa logique interne !
Cet exercice est TRES difficile, c'est pourquoi il demande beaucoup de réflexion et d'attention, de rigueur aussi dans l'application des règles. Vous ne devez le poster QU'UNE FOIS (ne faire qu'un seul exemplaire).
Pour que chacun ait la possibilité de travailler avec nous, cet exercice a des niveaux différents. Vous pouvez choisir celui qui vous convient :
Le niveau fera une seule phrase en moins de 80 mots.
Le niveau une seule phrase et toujours 60 mots, au plus.
Le niveau **, pour les plus habiles, fera une phrase de moins de 40 mots...
I'm sure you'll have inspiration...

Here are the words:

- To FLY - To COOK - DARKNESS - STATIONERY - ENORMOUS - JOYFUL - UNLIKE - SO AS TO - et une forme exclamative.

Lien internet


C'est parti pour une " très jolie phrase correcte et courte ! "
May THE FORCE be with all of us! ☀️ ☀️

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Réponse : Playing with words/48 de icare29, postée le 09-10-2023 à 10:26:53 (S | E)
Hello dear Here4u , here is my sentence .....

To FLY - To COOK - DARKNESS - STATIONERY - ENORMOUS - JOYFUL - UNLIKE - SO AS TO - et une forme exclamative.


HOW EXTRAORDINARY you are ! UNLIKE other cookers you ARE FLYING through recipes found in STATIONERY , showing your capability to COOK in DARKNESS an ENORMOUS cake SO AS TO prove that you remain ever the best JOYFUL pastry chef living in that country... 38 WORDS

Thanks for your correction and your relevant observations

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Réponse : Playing with words/48 de amalia80, postée le 09-10-2023 à 16:52:28 (S | E)
Hello Here4u, thank you for the correction.

To FLY - To COOK - DARKNESS - STATIONERY - ENORMOUS - JOYFUL - UNLIKE - SO AS TO - et une forme exclamative.

I feel like I am FLYING : what an ENORMOUS pleasure to COOK this JOYFUL recipe that I found in a pile of STATIONERY and, UNLIKE usual, SO AS TO enjoy all the flavours, eat it in the DARKNESS !
38 WORDS

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Réponse : Playing with words/48 de magie8, postée le 10-10-2023 à 00:35:36 (S | E)
HELLO bonjour thank you for correction
SO AS TO win the contest, the JOYFUL chief were COOKING a beautiful ENORMOUS cake in a DARKNESS, based on a recipe written on STATIONERY; UNLIKE the flies were FLYING around, nobody moved; WHAT A FUNNY SUSPENSE!. 37 words

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Réponse : Playing with words/48 de littlerene24, postée le 11-10-2023 à 14:00:12 (S | E)
Hello Here4u, here is my sentence.

When Frantz switched the light on SO AS TO disperse the DARKNESS and, UNLIKE the JOYFUL mess he was expecting, with SATIONERY everywhere, he discovered a dirty kitchen, witches WERE COOKING horrors, ENORMOUS flies WERE FLYING around! (36 words)

May the force be with you too.

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Réponse : Playing with words/48 de here4u, postée le 26-10-2023 à 23:11:12 (S | E)
Hello dears!

Encore quelques jours pour participer ! N'hésitez pas !

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Réponse : Playing with words/48 de here4u, postée le 31-10-2023 à 23:52:35 (S | E)
Hello, dear writers and readers...

Voici, comme d'habitude, vos phrases avec vocabulaire "contraint", corrigées à minima pour ne pas vous trahir !


- HOW EXTRAORDINARY you are ! UNLIKE other cookers you ARE FLYING through recipes found in STATIONERY (BOOKS), showing your capability to COOK in DARKNESS an ENORMOUS cake SO AS TO prove that you remain ever the best JOYFUL pastry-chef living in that country... 38 WORDS

confusion 'cooker' et 'cook' (un cuisinier/ un chef)
- flying through recipes???
- attention à la place du COD dans la phrase.
- Lien internet



- I feel (like I am FLYING : what an ENORMOUS pleasure to COOK this JOYFUL recipe that I found in a pile of STATIONERY (books) and, UNLIKE (usual, SO AS TO enjoy all the flavours, eat it in the DARKNESS !
38 WORDS

- I feel like flying: j'ai envie de m'envoler !// as if I were flying: comme si je volais.



- SO AS TO win the contest, the JOYFUL (chief were (sujet au sing, verbe au pluriel !) COOKING a beautiful ENORMOUS cake in (a DARKNESS, based on a recipe written on a STATIONERY ( book); UNLIKE the flies XXXX were FLYING around, nobody moved; WHAT A FUNNY SUSPENSE! 37 words
Revoir l’ordre des mots.


- When Frantz switched the light on SO AS TO disperse ?? the DARKNESS and, UNLIKE the JOYFUL mess he was expecting, with SATIONERY everywhere, he discovered a dirty kitchen, witches (who? WERE COOKING horrors, ENORMOUS flies WERE FLYING around! (36 words)
Not very clear.


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- HOW EXTRAORDINARY you are! UNLIKE other cooks/ chefs you ARE FLYING through recipes found in STATIONERY BOOKS, showing your capability to COOK an ENORMOUS cake in DARKNESS SO AS TO prove that you still remain the best JOYFUL pastry-chef living in that country... 38 WORDS


- I feel I am FLYING: what an ENORMOUS pleasure to COOK this JOYFUL recipe that I found in a pile of STATIONERY books and, UNLIKE usually, SO AS TO enjoy all the flavours, eat it in the DARKNESS ! 38 WORDS



- SO AS TO win the contest, the JOYFUL chef was COOKING a beautiful ENORMOUS cake in DARKNESS, based on a recipe written on a STATIONERY book; UNLIKE the flies which were FLYING around, nobody moved; WHAT A FUNNY SUSPENSE! 37 words


- When Frantz switched the light on SO AS TO replace the DARKNESS, UNLIKE the JOYFUL mess he was expecting with SATIONERY everywhere, he discovered a dirty kitchen, and witches who WERE COOKING horrors; ENORMOUS flies WERE FLYING around! (36 words)

Bravo à vous et de votre travail!

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