Correction/Timberlake
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Message de missba2001 posté le 17-06-2017 à 20:24:45 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis nouvelle sur le site et j'aurais besoin de votre aide pour corriger mon texte en anglais pour ma présentation orale.
Voici le contexte: je suis Justin Timberlake lorsqu'il était dans son groupe "NSYNC" donc je dois me présenter en faisant ma biographie alors le texte est au "je" mais je parle aussi au passé.
Donc le voici/ I need this text to be corrected as soon as possible, please.
"So I, Justin Rendall Timberlake, was born on January 31,1981 in Tenesse. I am a singer, a songwriter, an actor and a dancer. My parents got divorced so I was raised by my mom which I'm very close and by the way, she is the one who has found the name oh the group, but I will talk about it later. My half-sister Laura Katherine died after birth and it mentioned in my aknowledgment in our (Nsync) album "My Angel in Heaven". My family is only composed of musicians like my grandfaher who introduced me to country music like Johnny Cash. At the age of 11, I appared on the TV show "Star Search" which I've performed country songs as "Justin Rendall". I began my career on "The New Mickey House Club" were I've met my futur girlfriend Britney Spears and my futur bandmate JC. After that, Nsync become famous. In 1999, I apparedin the Disney Channel movie "Model Behavior" which I've played a model. In 2002, I've performed at the 2002 MTV Video Music Awards where I premiered my debut solo single "Like I love you" and I was still in the group and it went on the seller over 3 millions copies on US ans more than a million copies worlwide."
SVP, S'il vous plait, j'ai besoin que le texte soit traduit aujourdhui le plus vite possible car mon oral c'est lundi pour avoir plus de temps pour l'apprendre par coeur!
en avance pour vos réponses rapides!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-06-2017 21:39
Message de missba2001 posté le 17-06-2017 à 20:24:45 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis nouvelle sur le site et j'aurais besoin de votre aide pour corriger mon texte en anglais pour ma présentation orale.
Voici le contexte: je suis Justin Timberlake lorsqu'il était dans son groupe "NSYNC" donc je dois me présenter en faisant ma biographie alors le texte est au "je" mais je parle aussi au passé.
Donc le voici/ I need this text to be corrected as soon as possible, please.
"So I, Justin Rendall Timberlake, was born on January 31,1981 in Tenesse. I am a singer, a songwriter, an actor and a dancer. My parents got divorced so I was raised by my mom which I'm very close and by the way, she is the one who has found the name oh the group, but I will talk about it later. My half-sister Laura Katherine died after birth and it mentioned in my aknowledgment in our (Nsync) album "My Angel in Heaven". My family is only composed of musicians like my grandfaher who introduced me to country music like Johnny Cash. At the age of 11, I appared on the TV show "Star Search" which I've performed country songs as "Justin Rendall". I began my career on "The New Mickey House Club" were I've met my futur girlfriend Britney Spears and my futur bandmate JC. After that, Nsync become famous. In 1999, I apparedin the Disney Channel movie "Model Behavior" which I've played a model. In 2002, I've performed at the 2002 MTV Video Music Awards where I premiered my debut solo single "Like I love you" and I was still in the group and it went on the seller over 3 millions copies on US ans more than a million copies worlwide."
en avance pour vos réponses rapides! -------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 17-06-2017 21:39
Réponse : Correction/Timberlake de here4u, postée le 17-06-2017 à 22:10:37 (S | E)
Hello !
"So I, Justin Rendall Timberlake, was born on January 31,1981 in Tenesse. I am a singer, a songwriter, an actor and a dancer. My parents got divorced so I was raised by my mom which
I'm very close TO and by the way, she is the one who has found the name oh the group, but I will talk about it later. My half-sister Laura Katherine died after birth and it mentioned (manque l'auxiliaire du passif)in my aknowledgment in our (Nsync) album "My Angel in Heaven". My family is only composed of musicians like my grandfaher who introduced me to country music like Johnny Cash. At the age of 11, I appared on the TV show "Star Search" IN which I've performed country such songs as "Justin Rendall". I began my career on "The New Mickey House Club" were I've met my futurE girlfriend Britney Spears and my futurE bandmate JC. After that, Nsync become(TENSE) famous. In 1999, I appared in the Disney Channel movie "Model Behavior" IN which I've played a model. In 2002, I've performed at the 2002 MTV Video Music Awards where I premiered my debut solo single "Like I love you" and I was still in the group and it went on
the seller over 3 millions copies on IN THE US ans more than a million copies worlwide."Réponse : Correction/Timberlake de missba2001, postée le 17-06-2017 à 23:01:18 (S | E)
Thanks here4u!
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