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Message de soniasbz posté le 29-05-2016 à 17:11:30 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir
quelqu'un du groupe peut-il m'aider pour revoir mon anglais s'il vous plait?.
Je dois remettre le résumé suivant d'un article scientifique ne dépassant pas 150 mots (j'ai fait pile
)
Merci pour vos réponses.
The new analysis, published in the August 29 issue of Science, deals with outbreak of Ebola virus. It reveals that after an analysis of 99 sequences Ebola virus genome, the current Ebola outbreak originated from an earlier initial leap from the wild into humans
It explains that the spread of the virus in Sierra Leone and neighbouring countries is the descendant of an Ebola viral outbreak and not new versions of the pathogen.
In fact, Ebola has a relatively slow mutation rate compared with influenza and HIV, but its changes still grow faster than those of the smallpox virus.
Also, this study provided evidence that once the virus was introduced into the human population, his transmission is high from person to person.
Therefore, to put under control the epidemic, the different countries must have priority in providing quick response, identification and isolation of cases and provide adequate medical care.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-05-2016 17:13
Message de soniasbz posté le 29-05-2016 à 17:11:30 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir
quelqu'un du groupe peut-il m'aider pour revoir mon anglais s'il vous plait?.
Je dois remettre le résumé suivant d'un article scientifique ne dépassant pas 150 mots (j'ai fait pile
)Merci pour vos réponses.
The new analysis, published in the August 29 issue of Science, deals with outbreak of Ebola virus. It reveals that after an analysis of 99 sequences Ebola virus genome, the current Ebola outbreak originated from an earlier initial leap from the wild into humans
It explains that the spread of the virus in Sierra Leone and neighbouring countries is the descendant of an Ebola viral outbreak and not new versions of the pathogen.
In fact, Ebola has a relatively slow mutation rate compared with influenza and HIV, but its changes still grow faster than those of the smallpox virus.
Also, this study provided evidence that once the virus was introduced into the human population, his transmission is high from person to person.
Therefore, to put under control the epidemic, the different countries must have priority in providing quick response, identification and isolation of cases and provide adequate medical care.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-05-2016 17:13
Réponse: Aide/ résumé de gerondif, postée le 29-05-2016 à 23:11:03 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
erreurs en bleu, corrections en vert
The new analysis, published in the August 29 issue of Science (la date paraît bancale, pour moi, il manque l'année), deals with the outbreak of the Ebola virus (c'est défini). It reveals that after an analysis of 99 sequences Ebola virus genome (j'aurais mis sequences en dernier), the current Ebola outbreak originated from an earlier initial leap from the wild into humans
It explains that the spread of the virus in Sierra Leone and neighbouring countries is the descendant of an Ebola viral outbreak and not new versions of the pathogen.
In fact, Ebola has a relatively slow mutation rate compared with(to) influenza and HIV, but its changes still grow faster than those of the smallpox virus.
Also, this study provided evidence that once the virus was introduced into the human population, his transmission is high from person to person.
Therefore, to put the epidemic under control , the different countries must have priority in(ne me semble pas convenir: To put the epidemic under control, the utmost priority of the different countries should be to provide a quick response.....) providing quick response, identification and isolation of cases and provide adequate medical care.
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