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Message de coucouparis posté le 03-05-2016 à 10:28:37 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
Je suis en Terminale s et je passe mes oraux de langues dans quelques jours. J'ai fait mes fiches mais j'ai sûrement fait des erreurs... Quelqu'un peut m'aider à les corriger s'il vous plaît ?
Merci beaucoup et bonne journée au passage
Introduction :
A myth is a figure that marked his era in which leaves an imprint in time can be related the myths to the icon. The icon of a nation, the icon of generation. Even if the icon may designate a religious figure too.
The hero can be a mythological figure, it may be from comic strip but also a person who is admired for is achievement in a private life. A hero is not necessarily someone famous.
Question : Which are the hero/icons of modern times ? For illustrate this idea we are talking about the hero that revolutionized our lifestyle and those who earn less known.
Development :
When we talking about heroes of modern time we think instantly at Steve Job and his evolution of a technology that touch actually the worldwide.which earned him his death compared to Edison in the New York time daily. Because of the tidal wave that has caused his death in the community of "Apple Addict" who considered him like a guru. But we van talk about in the same style Bill Gate or Einstein. For heroes who earn more to be known, the soldier who sacrificed an entire life for is homeland example the American soldier buried in Coleville sur Mer which is a symbol of the heroism of the firefighters partner after the ground zero of which are a symbol of bravery and commitment. While these heroes who are also modern day heroes are less known there like them some impact since they are often highlighted in the blockbuster to remember that too if those heroes.
But the hero of modern times can be different for different people if asked a black south african who is his hero we will answer it surely Nelson Mandela. It is a same for a Cuban who will answer certainly Che Guevara.
To conclude
The myth, the hero is unique to each is own his personal history has its hero is chosen according to the story and according to what brought us or what to bring or brought the company. This is an ideal role model for everyone because we wants to follow their history and make can be hers.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-05-2016 11:06
Message de coucouparis posté le 03-05-2016 à 10:28:37 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
Je suis en Terminale s et je passe mes oraux de langues dans quelques jours. J'ai fait mes fiches mais j'ai sûrement fait des erreurs... Quelqu'un peut m'aider à les corriger s'il vous plaît ?
Merci beaucoup et bonne journée au passage
Introduction :
A myth is a figure that marked his era in which leaves an imprint in time can be related the myths to the icon. The icon of a nation, the icon of generation. Even if the icon may designate a religious figure too.
The hero can be a mythological figure, it may be from comic strip but also a person who is admired for is achievement in a private life. A hero is not necessarily someone famous.
Question : Which are the hero/icons of modern times ? For illustrate this idea we are talking about the hero that revolutionized our lifestyle and those who earn less known.
Development :
When we talking about heroes of modern time we think instantly at Steve Job and his evolution of a technology that touch actually the worldwide.which earned him his death compared to Edison in the New York time daily. Because of the tidal wave that has caused his death in the community of "Apple Addict" who considered him like a guru. But we van talk about in the same style Bill Gate or Einstein. For heroes who earn more to be known, the soldier who sacrificed an entire life for is homeland example the American soldier buried in Coleville sur Mer which is a symbol of the heroism of the firefighters partner after the ground zero of which are a symbol of bravery and commitment. While these heroes who are also modern day heroes are less known there like them some impact since they are often highlighted in the blockbuster to remember that too if those heroes.
But the hero of modern times can be different for different people if asked a black south african who is his hero we will answer it surely Nelson Mandela. It is a same for a Cuban who will answer certainly Che Guevara.
To conclude
The myth, the hero is unique to each is own his personal history has its hero is chosen according to the story and according to what brought us or what to bring or brought the company. This is an ideal role model for everyone because we wants to follow their history and make can be hers.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-05-2016 11:06
Réponse: Oral/Myths and Heroes de laure95, postée le 07-05-2016 à 20:52:39 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
-that marked his era in which (mettre un sujet)leaves an imprint in time.
- is (orthographe)achievement in a private life.
- For (pas la bonne préposition) illustrate this idea we are talking about the hero (pluriel)
- and those who earn less known: ?
Development :
- When we talking: temps?
- we think instantly at (pas la bonne préposition) Steve Job
- and his evolution of a technology that touch (faute de conjugaison) actually the worldwide.
- But we van (?,) talk about in the same style Bill Gate or Einstein.
- for is homeland
- (for) example
- the (enlever the)ground zero of which
are a symbol of bravery and commitment. - there like them some impact: ?
- to remember that too if those heroes: ?
- if asked a black south african who is his hero we will answer it surely Nelson Mandela: mal dit
To conclude
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- we wants: faute de conjugaison.
- and make can be hers: ?
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