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Message de airport56 posté le 30-04-2016 à 18:43:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour/Bonsoir,
J'ai un oral à présenter ce mardi en anglais sur la maison de mes rêves et décrire ma pièce préférée et j'aimerais que l'on m'aide à corriger mon texte.
Merci d'avance aux personnes qui m'aideront.
The house of my dreams is a big villa with two floors, a garden and a garage.
The garden is very beautiful, there are some flowers of all colors and all kinds on the lawn.
There is also a barbecue and two deckchairs.
The garage is very spacious, there is a car and two bikes.
On the first floor, there are four rooms : a bathroom, an American kitchen, a dining room and a living room.
On the second floor, there are five rooms : a game room, an office, an other bathroom and two bedrooms.
My favorite room is the living room because it's very spacious and so comfortable.
In the living room, therr's a carpet in the middle.
There's a coffee table on the carpet.
There's a laptot on the coffee table.
There's a sofa behind the coffee table.
There's a plasma TV in the front of the coffee table.
There's an other sofa left of the coffee table.
There's a plant next to the sofa.
There are some cushions on the sofa.
There are some pictures on the wall, above the plasma TV.
There's a magazine under the coffee table.
There's a piano behind the sofa.
There's a window near the plasma TV.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-04-2016 18:53
Message de airport56 posté le 30-04-2016 à 18:43:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour/Bonsoir,
J'ai un oral à présenter ce mardi en anglais sur la maison de mes rêves et décrire ma pièce préférée et j'aimerais que l'on m'aide à corriger mon texte.
Merci d'avance aux personnes qui m'aideront.
The house of my dreams is a big villa with two floors, a garden and a garage.
The garden is very beautiful, there are some flowers of all colors and all kinds on the lawn.
There is also a barbecue and two deckchairs.
The garage is very spacious, there is a car and two bikes.
On the first floor, there are four rooms : a bathroom, an American kitchen, a dining room and a living room.
On the second floor, there are five rooms : a game room, an office, an other bathroom and two bedrooms.
My favorite room is the living room because it's very spacious and so comfortable.
In the living room, therr's a carpet in the middle.
There's a coffee table on the carpet.
There's a laptot on the coffee table.
There's a sofa behind the coffee table.
There's a plasma TV in the front of the coffee table.
There's an other sofa left of the coffee table.
There's a plant next to the sofa.
There are some cushions on the sofa.
There are some pictures on the wall, above the plasma TV.
There's a magazine under the coffee table.
There's a piano behind the sofa.
There's a window near the plasma TV.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-04-2016 18:53
Réponse: Oral/House of my dreams de gerondif, postée le 01-05-2016 à 00:28:27 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
il n'y a pas grand chose à corriger dans votre texte assez répétitif par ailleurs.
erreurs en bleu, corrections en vert
The house of my dreams is a big villa with two floors, a garden and a garage.
The garden is very beautiful, there are some flowers of all colors and all kinds on the lawn.
There are various multicolour flowers all over the lawn.
There is also a barbecue and two deckchairs.
The garage is very spacious, there is a car and two bikes.
On the first floor, there are four rooms : a bathroom, an American kitchen, a dining room and a living room.
On the second floor, there are five rooms : a game room, an office, another bathroom and two bedrooms.
My favorite room is the living room because it's very spacious and so comfortable.
In the living room, therr's a carpet in the middle.
There's a coffee table on the carpet.
There's a laptotlaptop on the coffee table.
There's a sofa behind the coffee table.
There's a plasma TV in the front of the coffee table.
There's another sofa left of the coffee table.
There's a plant next to the sofa.
There are some cushions on the sofa.
There are some pictures on the wall, above the plasma TV.
There's a magazine under the coffee table.
There's a piano behind the sofa.
There's a window near the plasma TV.
Réponse: Oral/House of my dreams de airport56, postée le 01-05-2016 à 00:44:37 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup gerondif pour la correction.
Réponse: Oral/House of my dreams de airport56, postée le 01-05-2016 à 21:32:05 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Quelqu'un pourrait-il corriger pour la dernière fois mon texte s'il vous plaît? J'y ai apporté des dernières modifications.
Merci d'avance.
Le texte :
The house of my dreams is a big villa with two floors, a garden and a garage.
The garden is very beautiful,there are various multicolour flowers all over the lawn.
There is also a barbecue and two deckchairs.
The garage is very spacious, there is a car and two bikes.
On the first floor, there are four rooms : a bathroom, an American kitchen, a dining room and a livingroom.
On the second floor, there are five rooms : a game room, an office, another bathroom and two bedrooms.
My favorite room is the living room because it's very spacious and so comfortable.
In the living room, there is a carpet in the middle.
On the carpet, there's a coffe table.
On the coffee table, there's a laptop.
Behind the coffee table, there is a sofa.
In the front of the coffee table, there is a plasma TV.
Left of the coffee table, there's another sofa.
Next to the sofa, there's a lamp.
On the sofa, there are some cushions.
There are some pictures on the wall, above the plasma TV.
Under the coffee table, there is a magazine.
Behind the sofa, there is a piano.
There's a window near the plasma TV.
Finally, right of the coffee table, there is a big glass door.
She give on the garden and makes us enjoy an beautiful view on flowers of the garden.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-05-2016 22:08
Réponse: Oral/House of my dreams de gerondif, postée le 01-05-2016 à 23:26:50 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
The house of my dreams is a big villa with two floors, a garden and a garage.
The garden is very beautiful,there are various multicolour flowers all over the lawn.
There is also a barbecue and two deckchairs.
The garage is very spacious, there is a car and two bikes.
On the first floor, there are four rooms : a bathroom, an American kitchen, a dining room and a living-room.
On the second floor, there are five rooms : a game room, an office, another bathroom and two bedrooms.
My favourite room is the living room because it's very spacious and so comfortable.
In the living room, there is a carpet in the middle.
On the carpet, there's a coffee table.
On the coffee table, there's a laptop.
Behind the coffee table, there is a sofa.
In the front of the coffee table, there is a plasma TV.
(On the)Left of the coffee table, there's another sofa.
Next to the sofa, there's a lamp.
On the sofa, there are some cushions.
There are some pictures on the wall, above the plasma TV.
Under the coffee table, there is a magazine.
Behind the sofa, there is a piano.
There's a window near the plasma TV.
Finally, (on the)right of the coffee table, there is a big glass door.
She (pour une femme pas pour une porte) give(le s du present)(give ne va pas pour dire elle donne sur, utilisez open) on the garden and makes (mauvais choix de verbe, utilisez let)us enjoy an(b n'est pas un son voyelle) beautiful view on(of) flowers of (in) the garden.
Réponse: Oral/House of my dreams de airport56, postée le 02-05-2016 à 17:35:56 (S | E)
Je recorrige le texte car il y avait des fautes de frappes dans le précédent.
The house of my dreams is a big villa with two floors, a garden and a garage.
The garden is very beautiful,there are various multicolour flowers all over the lawn.
There is also a barbecue and two deckchairs.
The garage is very spacious, there is a car and two bikes.
On the first floor, there are four rooms : a bathroom, an American kitchen, a dining room and a living room.
On the second floor, there are five rooms : a game room, an office, another bathroom and two bedrooms.
My favourite room is the living room because it's very spacious and so comfortable.
In the living room, there is a carpet in the middle.
On the carpet, there's a coffee table.
On the coffee table, there's a laptop.
Behind the coffee table, there is a sofa.
In the front of the coffee table, there is a plasma TV.
On the Left of the coffee table, there's another sofa.
Next to the sofa, there's a lamp.
On the sofa, there are some cushions.
There are some pictures on the wall, above the plasma TV.
Under the coffee table, there is a magazine.
Behind the sofa, there is a piano.
There's a window near the plasma TV.
Finally, on the right of the coffee table, there is a big glass door.
It opens on the garden and let us enjoy a beautiful view of flowers.
Réponse: Oral/House of my dreams de gerondif, postée le 02-05-2016 à 17:44:25 (S | E)
Bonjour,
je crois que je vais finir par avoir une indigestion de there is there are !
It opens on the garden and let(présent simple troisième personne, comme open) us enjoy a beautiful view of the flowers there.
Réponse: Oral/House of my dreams de airport56, postée le 02-05-2016 à 18:04:31 (S | E)
Cette fois, c'est la bonne !
The house of my dreams is a big villa with two floors, a garden and a garage.
The garden is very beautiful,there are various multicolour flowers all over the lawn.
There is also a barbecue and two deckchairs.
The garage is very spacious, there is a car and two bikes.
On the first floor, there are four rooms : a bathroom, an American kitchen, a dining room and a living room.
On the second floor, there are five rooms : a game room, an office, another bathroom and two bedrooms.
My favourite room is the living room because it's very spacious and so comfortable.
In the living room, there is a carpet in the middle.
On the carpet, there's a coffee table.
On the coffee table, there's a laptop.
Behind the coffee table, there is a sofa.
In the front of the coffee table, there is a plasma TV.
On the Left of the coffee table, there's another sofa.
Next to the sofa, there's a lamp.
On the sofa, there are some cushions.
There are some pictures on the wall, above the plasma TV.
Under the coffee table, there is a magazine.
Behind the sofa, there is a piano.
There's a window near the plasma TV.
Finally, on the right of the coffee table, there is a big glass door.
It opens on the garden and lets us enjoy a beautiful view of the flowers there.
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