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Message de seathas posté le 26-04-2016 à 17:48:44 (S | E | F)
Hello everybody,
I'm working on a product review essay. In order to fir me to understand what kind of mistakes I have and correct my language, I would need some help, correction and feedback please.
Thank you for your replies.
Everyone knows that being a college student is very exhausting and laborious. In today’s age, not having the right tools is commonly a cause of many students’ hardships. A laptop has become as essential as a textbook or a school ID. The problem is that choices are numerous and finding a good laptop can be like finding a needle in a haystack, especially if you are looking for something that balances work and entertainment without exceeding your budget. Do not worry, Acer has you covered. The Aspire One is now here and can easily aid any student in navigating school smoothly. From students of art to engineering, the Aspire One Nitro Black Edition is the student’s best friend. It is thin, stylish, and delivers plenty of performance.
For students, it is essential to have a lightweight laptop to be able to carry it around campus, and a good battery that lasts during long class hours. The aspire One measures less than an inch thick, and it promises to never let you down and will stay powered up to 12 hours, thanks to its newly engineered 6-cell extended lithium flat battery. The Aspire One has a very innovative design: the build-quality is impressive. The materials used are high quality and feels premium. All those factors give the Aspire One a handsome and sleek design. Architecture, programming and video editing software work seamlessly on this machine. The notebook features impressive specs run by the Windows 10 operating system and has a pre-installed Microsoft Office, Adobe Reader, Power Management System, and an Anti-Virus software.
When we say campus life, we do not just mean schoolwork. The Aspire One can be used for extra-curricular activities, such as chatting, video gaming, social networking, watching movies, and listening to music. This is why the Aspire comes equipped with a 4k Ultra HD widescreen. Bright and colorful, so you can enjoy YouTube videos and Netflix in the highest quality possible. Under the hood, the Aspire One displays an NVidia graphics card, which is the leading technology in graphics cards. In terms of video games, the Aspire One can run even the most demanding video games. Since the processor is the most important thing that you need to consider as it is considered the brain of the computer, the Aspire comes Armed with a 4th Generation processor and it can destroy anything that crosses its path when deemed harmful. The laptop displays a beautiful ergonomic keyboard intended to provide optimum comfort with a red backlight to make it visible even when it is dark to enlighten your journey.
With all that being said, The Aspire One is an excellent laptop with a high-resolution screen and enough power for content-creation tasks. It is an excellent choice for students seeking to balance work and entertainment. With an $800 price tag, the Aspire One is a valuable tool to own. It stands up against all its competitors of similar price ranges and succeeds where most brands fail. It is thin, sleek, sturdy, and has plenty of performance.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-04-2016 23:32
Message de seathas posté le 26-04-2016 à 17:48:44 (S | E | F)
Hello everybody,
I'm working on a product review essay. In order to fir me to understand what kind of mistakes I have and correct my language, I would need some help, correction and feedback please.
Thank you for your replies.
Everyone knows that being a college student is very exhausting and laborious. In today’s age, not having the right tools is commonly a cause of many students’ hardships. A laptop has become as essential as a textbook or a school ID. The problem is that choices are numerous and finding a good laptop can be like finding a needle in a haystack, especially if you are looking for something that balances work and entertainment without exceeding your budget. Do not worry, Acer has you covered. The Aspire One is now here and can easily aid any student in navigating school smoothly. From students of art to engineering, the Aspire One Nitro Black Edition is the student’s best friend. It is thin, stylish, and delivers plenty of performance.
For students, it is essential to have a lightweight laptop to be able to carry it around campus, and a good battery that lasts during long class hours. The aspire One measures less than an inch thick, and it promises to never let you down and will stay powered up to 12 hours, thanks to its newly engineered 6-cell extended lithium flat battery. The Aspire One has a very innovative design: the build-quality is impressive. The materials used are high quality and feels premium. All those factors give the Aspire One a handsome and sleek design. Architecture, programming and video editing software work seamlessly on this machine. The notebook features impressive specs run by the Windows 10 operating system and has a pre-installed Microsoft Office, Adobe Reader, Power Management System, and an Anti-Virus software.
When we say campus life, we do not just mean schoolwork. The Aspire One can be used for extra-curricular activities, such as chatting, video gaming, social networking, watching movies, and listening to music. This is why the Aspire comes equipped with a 4k Ultra HD widescreen. Bright and colorful, so you can enjoy YouTube videos and Netflix in the highest quality possible. Under the hood, the Aspire One displays an NVidia graphics card, which is the leading technology in graphics cards. In terms of video games, the Aspire One can run even the most demanding video games. Since the processor is the most important thing that you need to consider as it is considered the brain of the computer, the Aspire comes Armed with a 4th Generation processor and it can destroy anything that crosses its path when deemed harmful. The laptop displays a beautiful ergonomic keyboard intended to provide optimum comfort with a red backlight to make it visible even when it is dark to enlighten your journey.
With all that being said, The Aspire One is an excellent laptop with a high-resolution screen and enough power for content-creation tasks. It is an excellent choice for students seeking to balance work and entertainment. With an $800 price tag, the Aspire One is a valuable tool to own. It stands up against all its competitors of similar price ranges and succeeds where most brands fail. It is thin, sleek, sturdy, and has plenty of performance.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-04-2016 23:32
Réponse: Evaluation/ essay de seathas, postée le 28-04-2016 à 03:27:19 (S | E)
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