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Message de sinock23 posté le 17-02-2016 à 14:22:07 (S | E | F)
Salut Bonjour à tous!
Je souhaiterais envoyer ma candidature pour un poste en anglais au sein d'une banque et aimerais par conséquent vous faire relire ma lettre de motivation (personne n'est apte à le faire autour de moi!)!
Dear Sir/Madam,
I recently completed my Master in XXX at the University of XXX and I am now looking for a professional experience in this field. I am therefore writing to you to apply for the Graduate Program at XXX entitled "XXX", which I believe would contribute to my professional development but also closely match my interests and abilities.
During my studies I acquired very good analytical skills and a strong knowledge in blabla, blabla, blabla and blabla, giving me key tools that will help me to deal with the challenges specific to this position and understand its most technical aspects. Furthermore, I am sociable, perseverant, organized, eager to learn from others and ready to get fully involved in all my future responsibilities.
The enclosed CV expands on my qualifications and experiences. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss how I could collaborate with you at XXX as well as to tell you more about my background.
I would be happy to supply you with any further information you may need. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing back from you.
Yours faithfully,
Qu'en pensez-vous? Y a-t-il une/des grosse(s) erreur(s) qui vous saute(nt) aux yeux? Merci d'avance pour le coup de main! (j'espère que je poste dans le bon forum, auquel cas je m'en excuse! Je suis nouveau!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-02-2016 21:50
Message de sinock23 posté le 17-02-2016 à 14:22:07 (S | E | F)
Je souhaiterais envoyer ma candidature pour un poste en anglais au sein d'une banque et aimerais par conséquent vous faire relire ma lettre de motivation (personne n'est apte à le faire autour de moi!)!
Dear Sir/Madam,
I recently completed my Master in XXX at the University of XXX and I am now looking for a professional experience in this field. I am therefore writing to you to apply for the Graduate Program at XXX entitled "XXX", which I believe would contribute to my professional development but also closely match my interests and abilities.
During my studies I acquired very good analytical skills and a strong knowledge in blabla, blabla, blabla and blabla, giving me key tools that will help me to deal with the challenges specific to this position and understand its most technical aspects. Furthermore, I am sociable, perseverant, organized, eager to learn from others and ready to get fully involved in all my future responsibilities.
The enclosed CV expands on my qualifications and experiences. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss how I could collaborate with you at XXX as well as to tell you more about my background.
I would be happy to supply you with any further information you may need. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing back from you.
Yours faithfully,
Qu'en pensez-vous? Y a-t-il une/des grosse(s) erreur(s) qui vous saute(nt) aux yeux? Merci d'avance pour le coup de main! (j'espère que je poste dans le bon forum, auquel cas je m'en excuse! Je suis nouveau!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-02-2016 21:50
Réponse: Banque/ Motivation de gerondif, postée le 17-02-2016 à 15:24:06 (S | E)
Bonjour,
je ne vois rien à redire.
I would welcome the opportunity to discuss how I could collaborate with you at XXX as well as to tell you more about my background.ce to tell you est loin de the opportunitu to... ja mettrais:
I would welcome the opportunity to discuss how I could collaborate with you at XXX and would be quite happy to tell you more about my background.
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