Grammaire/hockey
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Message de logan421 posté le 11-02-2016 à 10:02:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
pouvez-vous me dire s'il vous plait si ma grammaire est bonne ou pas du tout?
Merci pour vos réponses.
My favourite sport is the hockey ,that itself plays with 10 players and one keeper.the but of the hockey is ta win the match in ta score plus that the adversary . I am begining the hockey when i was 10 years .i started to royal Uccle sport, i played there until my 15 years. After i was going to royal Léopold club one of the best club in belgium. I like il very much. This years se have as objective ta be champions of belgium . But that will to very hard in working very hard and in is playing in team we will can to win against allteam
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-02-2016 21:30
Message de logan421 posté le 11-02-2016 à 10:02:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
pouvez-vous me dire s'il vous plait si ma grammaire est bonne ou pas du tout?
Merci pour vos réponses.
My favourite sport is the hockey ,that itself plays with 10 players and one keeper.the but of the hockey is ta win the match in ta score plus that the adversary . I am begining the hockey when i was 10 years .i started to royal Uccle sport, i played there until my 15 years. After i was going to royal Léopold club one of the best club in belgium. I like il very much. This years se have as objective ta be champions of belgium . But that will to very hard in working very hard and in is playing in team we will can to win against allteam
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-02-2016 21:30
Réponse: Grammaire/hockey de gerondif, postée le 11-02-2016 à 17:42:19 (S | E)
Bonjour,
erreurs en bleu, corrections en vert.
My favourite sport is
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