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Message de nicojulien posté le 26-01-2016 à 17:38:45 (S | E | F)
Hi,
I need help please !
I wish to send my cv and cover letter to a company based in Gibraltar. The role is not advertised on the website company.
Could you help me to review my cover letter please ?
Many thanks for your help
Dear Sir,
I am writing to apply for an Account Manager position in your company as I am seeking a new role in Spain and Gibraltar. In addition to this cover letter you will find enclosed my CV.
I am currently holding an Account Manager position at (company name) and I wish to pursue my career in sales and domain name management as I am definitely passionate by my profession.
Furthermore I have wished to settle in Andalusia for a long time and expect to achieve this project as soon as possible. Therefore I consider (Company name) as a strong professional opportunity thanks to your activity, location and performances.
As you can notice, I have worked in the domain name industry for more than 3.5 years in France and the UK with Company name, giving me a wide range of skills that would meet and exceed the expectations for the role. My experience with (company name) and current role as an Account Manager helped me to improve my sales, management and technical skills about domain name management and internet related services. I have learnt how to work with all kind of customers: from individuals to the most important French companies, selling them the right services and giving them the best advices.
Thanks to my professional experiences in France, UK and Spain, I would be able to bring you essential skills in order to develop your company: my language skills in French, Spanish and English, my ability to adapt to an International environment and my will to succeed in sales. I would relish the opportunity to bring this level of skills at (Company name) and develop my knowledge with a (confidential).
I would be please to meet you during a phone interview in order to show you further interest for this position and to tell you more about my professional background and availability.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-01-2016 21:18
Message de nicojulien posté le 26-01-2016 à 17:38:45 (S | E | F)
Hi,
I need help please !
I wish to send my cv and cover letter to a company based in Gibraltar. The role is not advertised on the website company.
Could you help me to review my cover letter please ?
Many thanks for your help
Dear Sir,
I am writing to apply for an Account Manager position in your company as I am seeking a new role in Spain and Gibraltar. In addition to this cover letter you will find enclosed my CV.
I am currently holding an Account Manager position at (company name) and I wish to pursue my career in sales and domain name management as I am definitely passionate by my profession.
Furthermore I have wished to settle in Andalusia for a long time and expect to achieve this project as soon as possible. Therefore I consider (Company name) as a strong professional opportunity thanks to your activity, location and performances.
As you can notice, I have worked in the domain name industry for more than 3.5 years in France and the UK with Company name, giving me a wide range of skills that would meet and exceed the expectations for the role. My experience with (company name) and current role as an Account Manager helped me to improve my sales, management and technical skills about domain name management and internet related services. I have learnt how to work with all kind of customers: from individuals to the most important French companies, selling them the right services and giving them the best advices.
Thanks to my professional experiences in France, UK and Spain, I would be able to bring you essential skills in order to develop your company: my language skills in French, Spanish and English, my ability to adapt to an International environment and my will to succeed in sales. I would relish the opportunity to bring this level of skills at (Company name) and develop my knowledge with a (confidential).
I would be please to meet you during a phone interview in order to show you further interest for this position and to tell you more about my professional background and availability.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-01-2016 21:18
Réponse: Cover letter/aide de lucile83, postée le 09-02-2016 à 13:55:06 (S | E)
Hello,....anyone?
Réponse: Cover letter/aide de here4u, postée le 09-02-2016 à 17:58:10 (S | E)
Hello !
Dear Sir,
I am writing to apply for an Account Manager position in your company as I am seeking a new role in Spain and Gibraltar. In addition to this cover letter you will find enclosed my CV.ordre des mots.
I am currently holding an Account Manager position at (company name) and I wish to pursue (advance?) my career in sales and domain name management as I am definitely passionate by my profession. Lien internet
Furthermore I have wished to settle in Andalusia for a long time and expect to achieve this project as soon as possible. Therefore I consider (Company name) as a strong professional opportunity thanks to your activity, location and performances.
As you can notice,(from my CV?) I have worked in the domain name industry for more than 3.5 years in France and the UK with Company name, giving me , which gave me .../provided me with/ a wide range of skills that would meet and exceed the expectations for the role. My experience with (company name) and current role as an Account Manager helped me to improve my sales, management and technical skills about domain name management and internet related services. I have learnt how to work with all kind of customers(not very respectful!): from individuals to the most important French companies, selling them the right services and giving them the best advices.
Thanks to my professional experiences in France, UK and Spain, I would be able to bring you essential skills in order to develop your company:(quelques nuances seraient souhaitables!
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) my language skills in French, Spanish and English, my ability to adapt to an International environment and my will to succeed in sales. I would relish the opportunity to bring this level of skills at (Company name) and develop my knowledge with a (confidential).I would be please to meet you during a phone interview in order to show you further interest for this position and to tell you more about my professional background and availability.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
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