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Message de wallstreetengli posté le 06-12-2015 à 22:47:09 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plait pour la correction de ce petit exposé sur youtube?
Je vous remercie par avance.
I think all the people here now youtube. Who have never watch a video on youtube or listen to a music ?
Youtube was founded by three men chad hurley,steve chen and jawad karim in February 14, 2005.It’s the most important video sharing website in all the world far ahead daylimotion. One of the foundator of the webiste said that the inspiration to create this website came after the tsunami Before the creation of youtube it was very difficult to find quickly and easily a video about the actuality. It’s the most important video sharing website in all the world far ahead daylimotion.
To show you the importance of Youtube,here are some figures.,in 2014 Youtube achieve a turnover of 3,5 billion of dollars at the end of the subject (exposé) a total of 3000 minutes are gonna to be upload on the website. The site has 800 million unique users a month YouTube is the third most visited website in the world.
These last years a new phenomenon has appeared,the phenomenon of “youtubers” as it called in french.The youtubers are an another group of personn who can earn a lot of money with this website.
By what means the youtubers earn money?
In the first part we’re going to see what is the compensation system of youtube and in the second part we’re going to introduce you the various contents proposed by the youtubers.
To begin I want to remind you;win million of dollars with a youtube channel isn’t realistic above all in france with the tax on companies and the reduced public due to low number of francophones
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-12-2015 08:14
Message de wallstreetengli posté le 06-12-2015 à 22:47:09 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plait pour la correction de ce petit exposé sur youtube?
Je vous remercie par avance.
I think all the people here now youtube. Who have never watch a video on youtube or listen to a music ?
Youtube was founded by three men chad hurley,steve chen and jawad karim in February 14, 2005.It’s the most important video sharing website in all the world far ahead daylimotion. One of the foundator of the webiste said that the inspiration to create this website came after the tsunami Before the creation of youtube it was very difficult to find quickly and easily a video about the actuality. It’s the most important video sharing website in all the world far ahead daylimotion.
To show you the importance of Youtube,here are some figures.,in 2014 Youtube achieve a turnover of 3,5 billion of dollars at the end of the subject (exposé) a total of 3000 minutes are gonna to be upload on the website. The site has 800 million unique users a month YouTube is the third most visited website in the world.
These last years a new phenomenon has appeared,the phenomenon of “youtubers” as it called in french.The youtubers are an another group of personn who can earn a lot of money with this website.
By what means the youtubers earn money?
In the first part we’re going to see what is the compensation system of youtube and in the second part we’re going to introduce you the various contents proposed by the youtubers.
To begin I want to remind you;win million of dollars with a youtube channel isn’t realistic above all in france with the tax on companies and the reduced public due to low number of francophones
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-12-2015 08:14
Réponse: Correction/youtube de laure95, postée le 08-12-2015 à 14:02:54 (S | E)
Bonjour,
- now = maintenant, pas "savoir".
- Who have never watch a video on youtube or listen to a music: HAVE + PARTICIPE PASSE DU VERBE.
-in February 14, 2005: pas la bonne préposition.
- video sharing: inverser les 2 mots.
- the actuality
- in 2014 Youtube achieve: mettre au pséée.
- gonna to be upload.
- it called: il manque BE conjugué.
- in french: majuscule.
- personn
- By what means the youtubers earn money?:revoir la construction d'une question.
-what is the compensation system of YouTube: question indirecte: what + sujet + verbe.
- win million of dollars: pas le bon verbe.
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