Short story/aide

Short story/aide
Message de yacineh posté le 17-10-2015 à 17:29:00 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plait? I must tell a short story, true or false.

Words are magic.
Imagine an orchard and a story can begin. Open the door in morning mist and go walking between the apple trees.
That isn't enough to build a story, I know. But something could happen. You're almost alone, as Mrs Muir in his house. If a ghost appears near you, don't be frightened. Perhaps, he wishes discuss with you and tell you his incredible life, walking arm in arm with you. Your nasty neighbours will think perhaps you're crazy.... don't worry. The most important is the lovely story which you go to write.

Thank you for your advice.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-10-2015 20:48

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Réponse: Short story/aide de brution, postée le 18-10-2015 à 06:52:28 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Comme vous n'avez pas de réponse quelques réflexions.
I must* tell a short story, ( true or false )**.
Lien internet

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Words are magic.
Imagine an orchard and a story can begin.
Open the door in * morning mist and go** walking between the apple trees.
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That isn't enough to build a story, I know.
But something could happen. You're almost alone, as* Mrs Muir in his house.
*Lien internet

If a ghost appears near you, don't be frightened.
Perhaps, he wishes *discuss with you and tell you his incredible life, walking arm in arm with you.
* to ?
Your nasty neighbours will think perhaps* you're crazy.... don't worry. The most important** is the lovely story which*** you go** to write.
* maybe ? ** the most important thing ?
**are going to ? will ?
***Lien internet

Bonne continuation .

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Réponse: Short story/aide de yacineh, postée le 18-10-2015 à 10:31:14 (S | E)

Thank you.
I do the exercises suggested.
Best regards
Yacineh

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