Surgery/expression écrite

Surgery/expression écrite
Message de destroyx posté le 07-06-2015 à 11:38:11 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
pouvez-vous m'aider s'il vous plait à corriger ce texte (s'il y a des fautes) ? Merci pour vos réponses.

This texte talk about surgery of one woman. She wanted to look like Barbie and Sindy. She wanted the wide eyes so she had her eyes widened as much as she could. After, she had her nose turned up but she wasn't happy with the first nose job because it only made it slightly smaller. So she had it done again. Now she nose is as Barbie. Her chin bothered her a lot too, she having that moved back. Then, she changed her lips. So she tried had collagen put in. She had fat taken from her thinghs and injected into her lips. Then, she had implants put into her checks to give her high checkbones. Before she had surgery, she was invisible but now she get lots of attention.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-06-2015 12:21

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Réponse: Surgery/expression écrite de here4u, postée le 07-06-2015 à 11:49:00 (S | E)
hello !

This texte talk about X surgery of one woman.(clumsy) She wanted to look like Barbie and Sindy. She wanted the wide eyes so she had her eyes widened as much as she could. After, she had her nose turned up but she wasn't happy with the first nose job because it only made it slightly smaller. So she had it done again. Now she nose is as Barbie. Her chin bothered her a lot too, she having that moved back. Then, she changed her lips. So she tried had collagen put in. She had fat taken from her thinghs and injected into her lips. Then, she had implants put into her checks to give her high checkbones. Before she had surgery, she was invisible but now she get lots of attention.

I bet she does!

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Réponse: Surgery/expression écrite de destroyx, postée le 07-06-2015 à 12:35:03 (S | E)
thank you

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