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Message de haika57 posté le 03-05-2015 à 17:37:35
Bonjour,
j'ai encore besoin d'aide pour mon 2eme sujet pour mon oral dans quelques jours,
Pouvez vous m'aider a la correction?
Elton John, his biography
Pop Star
It is the emblematic figure of international pop.
This is real star the dice senventies years.
He ir is also a remarkable pianist.
He puts his talent available to several sound tracks.
Reginald Kennth Dwight, aka Elton John, was born in March thousand nine hundred forty-seven (1947) in Pinner in Britain.
Ver young he developed a passion for music.
At eleven (7 ans), he won the first prize in piano at the Royal Academy.
In the late sixties (année 60), he turned to pop music.
He began her career in small local groups.
He released his first solo album ‘Emply Sky » in nineten seventy nine (1969).
It becomes a real star in the early seventies.
He collects tubes with albums « greatest Hits », Captain Fantastic and the Brown Dirt Cowboy » and « A Single Man ».
The eigtyies are for kim synonymous in question rebate.
It feeds worldly gossip for years.
He decided to lends his image and texts to good causes.
He knows a worldwide succes with the album « Sleeping With The Past » and the song « Sacrifice ».
He then reverse all profits to varius charities working againts A.I.D.S
Late nineteen ninety (1990), he released the double-album « The Very Best Of Elton John », wich carned him a Brits Award for Best Mann Artist.
Then follow, « To Be Continued » and « The One » (his biggest success).
Two miles (2000), he devoted hinself to his musical « Aida ».
He celebrated is thirty years (30 ans) of eaving careers « One Night Only, The Greatest Hits ».
In twoo thousand four (2004), seens the album « Peachtree Road ».
It was nos until September, two thousand thirteen (2013) Elton John so that finally a new album « The Divins Board »
Since the seventies, the artist has sold three hundred fifty million (350 millions) records worldwide.
Merci pour votre aide.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-05-2015 17:58
mp envoyé pour problème de traduction en ligne
Message de haika57 posté le 03-05-2015 à 17:37:35
Bonjour,
j'ai encore besoin d'aide pour mon 2eme sujet pour mon oral dans quelques jours,
Pouvez vous m'aider a la correction?
Elton John, his biography
Pop Star
It is the emblematic figure of international pop.
This is real star the dice senventies years.
He ir is also a remarkable pianist.
He puts his talent available to several sound tracks.
Reginald Kennth Dwight, aka Elton John, was born in March thousand nine hundred forty-seven (1947) in Pinner in Britain.
Ver young he developed a passion for music.
At eleven (7 ans), he won the first prize in piano at the Royal Academy.
In the late sixties (année 60), he turned to pop music.
He began her career in small local groups.
He released his first solo album ‘Emply Sky » in nineten seventy nine (1969).
It becomes a real star in the early seventies.
He collects tubes with albums « greatest Hits », Captain Fantastic and the Brown Dirt Cowboy » and « A Single Man ».
The eigtyies are for kim synonymous in question rebate.
It feeds worldly gossip for years.
He decided to lends his image and texts to good causes.
He knows a worldwide succes with the album « Sleeping With The Past » and the song « Sacrifice ».
He then reverse all profits to varius charities working againts A.I.D.S
Late nineteen ninety (1990), he released the double-album « The Very Best Of Elton John », wich carned him a Brits Award for Best Mann Artist.
Then follow, « To Be Continued » and « The One » (his biggest success).
Two miles (2000), he devoted hinself to his musical « Aida ».
He celebrated is thirty years (30 ans) of eaving careers « One Night Only, The Greatest Hits ».
In twoo thousand four (2004), seens the album « Peachtree Road ».
It was nos until September, two thousand thirteen (2013) Elton John so that finally a new album « The Divins Board »
Since the seventies, the artist has sold three hundred fifty million (350 millions) records worldwide.
Merci pour votre aide.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-05-2015 17:58
mp envoyé pour problème de traduction en ligne
Réponse: Oral bac pro // de gerondif, postée le 03-05-2015 à 17:48:30
Hello,
pour celui là, je pense que vous avez travaillé au traducteur automatique parce que
This is real star the dice senventies years. C'est une vraie star dés années soixante-dix,
oui mais dice, en anglais, ce sont les dés à jouer, pour faire un 421 par exemple....
idem pour "une remise en question: question rebate. Pas de bol, a rebate, c'est une remise de prix, une réduction
He collects tubes, oui mais tubes, ce sont des vrais tubes en métal, un tube , ça se dit a hit.
Il vaudrait mieux pour vous simplifier une biographie existante en anglais et l'apprendre que de tenter de traduire un texte français en anglais approximatif.
