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Message de mariesk22 posté le 27-03-2015 à 18:11:28 (S | E | F)
Salut, Bonjour,
Je dois rendre lundi 30 mars une rédaction d'anglais de 200 mots environ (entre 180 et 220)
Le sujet : raconter un bon souvenir, puis un mauvais, en rapport avec le collège.
Merci d'y jeter un coup d'œil et de signaler le + de fautes possibles !
Une of my best memories about school is the exchange with the twin city of Lamballe, Oliveira do Bairro (in Portugal).
The Portuguese has come in France during one week, they have visited the stud farm of Lamballe, the Mont St Michel, a cider-making, the ramparts of St Malo...
Before to leaving for Portugal, we had one class of portuguese and I have noticed than spanish and portuguese were very lifelike.
The outward journey was horrible, but the Portuguese were very nice, them school was coloured and enjoyable. We have visited the cellars in Porto, the city of Coimbra, the library Joanina and, in the return journey, a superb city : Salamanque. There are big skateparks, a university, a cathedral... We are gone to the Plaza Mayor, where the film Vantage Point was filmed in 2008.
My worse memorie takes place in the playgroung of the school. I have heart problems since a long time, and this day, after a big argument with my father who is teacher in this school (we not get on well), I was in the playground with friends and they have asked to me if I felt good. I have cogitated... And I fainted.
When I woken up in hospital, the doctor said to me that I done mild heart attack.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-03-2015 18:14
Message de mariesk22 posté le 27-03-2015 à 18:11:28 (S | E | F)
Je dois rendre lundi 30 mars une rédaction d'anglais de 200 mots environ (entre 180 et 220)
Le sujet : raconter un bon souvenir, puis un mauvais, en rapport avec le collège.
Merci d'y jeter un coup d'œil et de signaler le + de fautes possibles !
Une of my best memories about school is the exchange with the twin city of Lamballe, Oliveira do Bairro (in Portugal).
The Portuguese has come in France during one week, they have visited the stud farm of Lamballe, the Mont St Michel, a cider-making, the ramparts of St Malo...
Before to leaving for Portugal, we had one class of portuguese and I have noticed than spanish and portuguese were very lifelike.
The outward journey was horrible, but the Portuguese were very nice, them school was coloured and enjoyable. We have visited the cellars in Porto, the city of Coimbra, the library Joanina and, in the return journey, a superb city : Salamanque. There are big skateparks, a university, a cathedral... We are gone to the Plaza Mayor, where the film Vantage Point was filmed in 2008.
My worse memorie takes place in the playgroung of the school. I have heart problems since a long time, and this day, after a big argument with my father who is teacher in this school (we not get on well), I was in the playground with friends and they have asked to me if I felt good. I have cogitated... And I fainted.
When I woken up in hospital, the doctor said to me that I done mild heart attack.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-03-2015 18:14
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