Traduction/New year
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Message de wiwi2001 posté le 01-03-2015 à 14:40:23 (S | E | F)
Salut Bonjour,
J'ai écrit une traduction d'un texte français et j'aimerais savoir si quelqu'un pourrait m'aider à trouver mes erreurs s'il y en a.
Merci d'avance
Voilà le texte:
10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1 happy new year !!!!!
Finally a new year begin hoping it will be better than passed. After a drinking party, Paige,Tyler and I took the road direction the challet. Set down in Tyler's car,we were listening to Paige' stories: she was really drunk.
Suddenly, a man appear in front of us,Tyler tried to stop the car but he couldn't. To avoid him, Tyler swerved suddenly,sending the car in a tree.
Although I was hurted,I succeeded to get out of the car,I tried to help my friends who were still in the car when I heard a noise coming from the back of the vehicle, I approached it,and realized that it was a fuel leak. I ran to the other side of the vehicle to push out Paige and Tyler who was hardly hurted. The thunder begun to rumbled and the light burned the tree that we had hit. It stayed only few seconds before that the fire arrive to the car.
I had to run out to don't become wallpaper for forest because of the the explosion but I couldn't leave my two best friends in this blaze . I screamed,I shouted until to broke my vocal chords but there was nobody. I was alone,I was crying ,I didn't know what to do,I couldn't help Tyler and Paige. When suddenly,the man of before appeared. He completly desassembled the door ans get out Tyler ans Paige. I couldn't believe it, this man had an amazing and superhuman force. Suddenly,everything explosed...
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-03-2015 15:56
Message de wiwi2001 posté le 01-03-2015 à 14:40:23 (S | E | F)
J'ai écrit une traduction d'un texte français et j'aimerais savoir si quelqu'un pourrait m'aider à trouver mes erreurs s'il y en a.
Merci d'avance
Voilà le texte:
10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1 happy new year !!!!!
Finally a new year begin hoping it will be better than passed. After a drinking party, Paige,Tyler and I took the road direction the challet. Set down in Tyler's car,we were listening to Paige' stories: she was really drunk.
Suddenly, a man appear in front of us,Tyler tried to stop the car but he couldn't. To avoid him, Tyler swerved suddenly,sending the car in a tree.
Although I was hurted,I succeeded to get out of the car,I tried to help my friends who were still in the car when I heard a noise coming from the back of the vehicle, I approached it,and realized that it was a fuel leak. I ran to the other side of the vehicle to push out Paige and Tyler who was hardly hurted. The thunder begun to rumbled and the light burned the tree that we had hit. It stayed only few seconds before that the fire arrive to the car.
I had to run out to don't become wallpaper for forest because of the the explosion but I couldn't leave my two best friends in this blaze . I screamed,I shouted until to broke my vocal chords but there was nobody. I was alone,I was crying ,I didn't know what to do,I couldn't help Tyler and Paige. When suddenly,the man of before appeared. He completly desassembled the door ans get out Tyler ans Paige. I couldn't believe it, this man had an amazing and superhuman force. Suddenly,everything explosed...
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-03-2015 15:56
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