Correction/lettre motivation
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Message de gaby55 posté le 24-02-2015 à 14:47:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis actuellement à la recherche d'un job en Angleterre. J'ai déjà fait corriger ma lettre de motivation plusieurs fois, mais l'ayant modifiée, j'aimerais qu'on me corrige le paragraphe que voici :
"I can assure you, I am hardworking, consistent and motivated. My experience, as a member of cultural center named “l'Etre lieu”, has given me taste for events organisation. I also like the contact with the public and with the artists. But, i am very commited to environmental and social issues. In fact, i am interested by the fieldsurvey as a way to develop innovating solutions to existing challenges facing the public sector. In fact, I also spent time with the Roma families, especially the children during the last summer : So, i have embraced studies in sociology and ethnology. This gave me the opportunity to mend with many different people, and to understand better how some problematics of society are linked to one another. At the present time, i am involved in an environmental projet of the regional natural park nammed “Caps and Marais d'Opale thank to my education university : The aim is to understand social representations of the area by local inhabitants. That is why i would like to become a volonteer and participate in the creation of stimulating projects, as the latter, and to surpass myself in your organization."
Merci pour vos réponses !! Bonne journée.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-02-2015 16:00
Message de gaby55 posté le 24-02-2015 à 14:47:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis actuellement à la recherche d'un job en Angleterre. J'ai déjà fait corriger ma lettre de motivation plusieurs fois, mais l'ayant modifiée, j'aimerais qu'on me corrige le paragraphe que voici :
"I can assure you, I am hardworking, consistent and motivated. My experience, as a member of cultural center named “l'Etre lieu”, has given me taste for events organisation. I also like the contact with the public and with the artists. But, i am very commited to environmental and social issues. In fact, i am interested by the fieldsurvey as a way to develop innovating solutions to existing challenges facing the public sector. In fact, I also spent time with the Roma families, especially the children during the last summer : So, i have embraced studies in sociology and ethnology. This gave me the opportunity to mend with many different people, and to understand better how some problematics of society are linked to one another. At the present time, i am involved in an environmental projet of the regional natural park nammed “Caps and Marais d'Opale thank to my education university : The aim is to understand social representations of the area by local inhabitants. That is why i would like to become a volonteer and participate in the creation of stimulating projects, as the latter, and to surpass myself in your organization."
Merci pour vos réponses !! Bonne journée.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-02-2015 16:00
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