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Message de ruslan posté le 13-02-2015 à 14:43:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Je suis actuellement en recherche d'emploi en tant qu'ingénieur en biotechnologie. Voici la "cover letter" que j'ai rédigée. Pouvez-vous me dire ce que vous en pensez d'un point de vue linguistique ? Merci d'avance !
"Issue : R&D Engineer Application
Dear Sir or Madam,
Pathologies detection on which your products are centred (cancers, infectious illnesses…) is a major challenge in healthcare sector I would like to participate. Wishing to work in biotechnologies, and particularly on diagnosis issues, I propose to join your company as R&D engineer. Working in your innovating corporation will also increase my technological skills on this subject.
I have good basic knowledges in nanobiotechnologies thanks to my general engineer of xxxx school training, reinforced by an international research master on these subjects. These studies have been completed by an internship on formulation of magnetic nanoparticles for cancer diagnosis, and by my multidisciplinary Ph.D. thesis linked to nanofluidics, nanoporous particles and interface science.
During my internships and my three years of Ph.D. studies, I have increased my skills in chemistry, physics and mechanics. These jobs, in which collaborations and human relationships took a great part, have also developed my adaptation capacities and my project management competences.
Convinced by the scientific and societal impact of your products, I propose to join your teams in order to carry on together their development and their diversification. I have enclosed my resume to this cover letter for your consideration and I would appreciate an interview for discussing my profile. You can contact by phone or by e-mail for further informations.
Thank you for your consideration,"
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-02-2015 15:10
Message de ruslan posté le 13-02-2015 à 14:43:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Je suis actuellement en recherche d'emploi en tant qu'ingénieur en biotechnologie. Voici la "cover letter" que j'ai rédigée. Pouvez-vous me dire ce que vous en pensez d'un point de vue linguistique ? Merci d'avance !
"Issue : R&D Engineer Application
Dear Sir or Madam,
Pathologies detection on which your products are centred (cancers, infectious illnesses…) is a major challenge in healthcare sector I would like to participate. Wishing to work in biotechnologies, and particularly on diagnosis issues, I propose to join your company as R&D engineer. Working in your innovating corporation will also increase my technological skills on this subject.
I have good basic knowledges in nanobiotechnologies thanks to my general engineer of xxxx school training, reinforced by an international research master on these subjects. These studies have been completed by an internship on formulation of magnetic nanoparticles for cancer diagnosis, and by my multidisciplinary Ph.D. thesis linked to nanofluidics, nanoporous particles and interface science.
During my internships and my three years of Ph.D. studies, I have increased my skills in chemistry, physics and mechanics. These jobs, in which collaborations and human relationships took a great part, have also developed my adaptation capacities and my project management competences.
Convinced by the scientific and societal impact of your products, I propose to join your teams in order to carry on together their development and their diversification. I have enclosed my resume to this cover letter for your consideration and I would appreciate an interview for discussing my profile. You can contact by phone or by e-mail for further informations.
Thank you for your consideration,"
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-02-2015 15:10
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