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Message de lola255 posté le 04-02-2015 à 13:49:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai un essai à réaliser et aurais besoin de votre aide.
Je vous remercie d'avance pour votre aide.
Today, global warming is mainly due by man because we consumme too much and produce more waste. The energy which we use produce greenhouse effect gas and there is lot of pollution and wastes in our atmosphere, like nuclear waste, toxic waste, electronic waste but also polluting industries.... Moroever, the cars are responsible to pollution and produce fumes which are dangerous for the planet. But it's too difficult to give up her car because we'll lose our independance and we couldn't drive over a long distance.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-02-2015 22:24
Message de lola255 posté le 04-02-2015 à 13:49:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai un essai à réaliser et aurais besoin de votre aide.
Je vous remercie d'avance pour votre aide.
Today, global warming is mainly due by man because we consumme too much and produce more waste. The energy which we use produce greenhouse effect gas and there is lot of pollution and wastes in our atmosphere, like nuclear waste, toxic waste, electronic waste but also polluting industries.... Moroever, the cars are responsible to pollution and produce fumes which are dangerous for the planet. But it's too difficult to give up her car because we'll lose our independance and we couldn't drive over a long distance.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-02-2015 22:24
Réponse: Correction/ Climat de bluestar, postée le 05-02-2015 à 15:21:58 (S | E)
Bonjour..
Today, global warming is mainly due by man because we consumme too much and produce more waste. The energy which we use produce (accorde?) greenhouse effect gas and there is lot of pollution and wastes in our atmosphere, like such as nuclear waste, toxic waste, electronic waste but also
Réponse: Correction/ Climat de bluduck2, postée le 06-02-2015 à 15:06:54 (S | E)
Hello lola !
Pour "de nos jours", évitez"today" .Préférez "nowadays" ! Hope this helps ! Bluduck2
Réponse: Correction/ Climat de manona35, postée le 07-02-2015 à 15:48:06 (S | E)
Je vous remercie énormement d'avoir accepté de m'aider et prends en note tous vos conseils.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-02-2015 16:23
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