Correction/Laptop

Correction/Laptop
Message de trauzeur posté le 27-01-2015 à 11:00:04 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Could you help me please?
Thank you for your answers.

I am going to describe to you one possession I have and could not live without.
It’s all about my laptop. I could not live without it because I use it a lot for many things. I work with it so it helps me keeping all my bits and pieces. I also use it to study because all my important courses are stored in it. And best of all, I play computer games when I want to relax especially if I have nothing to do.
Basically, I use my laptop a lot and if I lost it, I would no longer be involved in many things I do in my daily life and as a result I would feel embarrassed and sad at the same time. My laptop is so important that I could not think even for one second living without it otherwise, I would be lost.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-01-2015 11:10

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Réponse: Correction/Laptop de notrepere, postée le 27-01-2015 à 17:03:02 (S | E)
Bonjour

I am going to describe to you one possession I have and could not live without: my laptop(1). I could not live without it because I use it a lot for many things. I work with it so it helps me keeping(2) all my bits and pieces. I also use it to study because all my important courses are stored in it. And best of all, I play computer games when I want to relax, especially if I have nothing to do.
Basically, I use my laptop a lot and if I lost it, I would no longer be involved in many things I do in my daily life and as a result I would feel embarrassed and sad at the same time. My laptop is so important that I could not even think of living without it for one second. Otherwise, I would be lost.

(1) deux points
(2) forme du mot

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Réponse: Correction/Laptop de trauzeur, postée le 28-01-2015 à 10:30:50 (S | E)

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