Bullying/correction

Bullying/correction
Message de htz0724 posté le 17-01-2015 à 18:03:46 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
Je souhaiterais avoir de l'aide de quelqu'un pour corriger mon texte, merci d'avance.

Bullying is a very wrong thing that is going on. No matter where we go or what we do, bullying is a serious problem .It affects everyday , Many people self harm themselves because of what other people say.
There are a lot of types of bullying . I think it's horrible and this could be completely avoided. People are bullies because they want to feel better about themselves, but in the long run, bullying can you make you feel worse about yourself.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-01-2015 19:04

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Réponse: Bullying/correction de notrepere, postée le 18-01-2015 à 05:43:29 (S | E)
Hello

Pas grand chose à corriger.

Bullying is a very wrong(autre mot) thing that is going on. No matter where we go or what we do, bullying is a serious problem. It affects us every day. Many people self harm themselves because of what other people say.
There are many types of bullying. I think it's horrible and this could be completely avoided. People are bullies because they want to feel better about themselves, but in the long run, bullying can you make you feel worse about yourself.

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Réponse: Bullying/correction de htz0724, postée le 18-01-2015 à 16:42:07 (S | E)
Merci

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