Correction/Stay alone

Correction/Stay alone
Message de addrock posté le 20-12-2014 à 17:00:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous ,
est-ce que vous pouvez m'aider à corriger ce texte en anglais s'il vous plaît et me dire s'il y a des fautes?
Merci pour vos réponses.
Today, i stay in my house aloune, my mom and my dad went to the cafe.
I don't like to stay aloune. I talked with my friend for tell him to came stay and play with me.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-12-2014 18:20
On doit écrire "I" , pas "i" ...

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Réponse: Correction/Stay alone de notrepere, postée le 20-12-2014 à 18:58:52 (S | E)
Hello

Today, i stay(forme progressive) in my house aloune(mal placé-il faut mettre avant "in"), my mom and my dad went to the cafe.
I don't like to stay aloune. I talked with my friend /for/ to tell him to came stay and play with me.

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Réponse: Correction/Stay alone de addrock, postée le 21-12-2014 à 09:15:32 (S | E)
Bonjour et merci

Today, I'm staying alone in my house, my mom and my dad went to the cofe.
I don't like to stay alone. I talked with my friend to tell him to come stay and play with me.

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Modifié par addrock le 21-12-2014 09:18

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Réponse: Correction/Stay alone de lucile83, postée le 21-12-2014 à 09:56:20 (S | E)
Hello,

Today, I'm staying alone in my house, my mom and my dad went to the cofe.
I don't like to stay alone. I talked with my friend to tell him to come ..... stay and play with me.

- in my house = at home
- cofe, non; cafe, oui dans le sens de cafeteria (attention à l'orthographe)
- il manque un mot entre come et stay pour relier les deux actions

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Réponse: Correction/Stay alone de addrock, postée le 21-12-2014 à 13:00:14 (S | E)
Hello,

-Je n'ai pas trouvé le mot qui manque entre ' come et stay ', vous pouvez me donner un exemple s'il vous plait?

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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-12-2014 15:27

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Réponse: Correction/Stay alone de lucile83, postée le 21-12-2014 à 15:32:25 (S | E)
Hello,

He wants to go and visit his grandparents soon.
She will come and have a cup of tea with me.

...my friend to tell him to come .... stay with me and play ...

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Réponse: Correction/Stay alone de addrock, postée le 21-12-2014 à 16:41:59 (S | E)
Hello,

Today, I'm staying alone at home, my mom and my dad went to the cafe.
I don't like to stay alone. I talked with my friend to tell him to come and play with me.

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Réponse: Correction/Stay alone de lucile83, postée le 21-12-2014 à 17:18:21 (S | E)
Hello,
Très bien !
Un détail: my mom and my dad went to the cafe....ou bien: my mom and dad went to the cafe.
'My' peut être commun à 'mom' et 'dad'.

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Réponse: Correction/Stay alone de addrock, postée le 23-12-2014 à 18:37:57 (S | E)
Bonjour
merci beaucoup

Today, I'm staying alone at home, my mom and dad went to the cafe.
I don't like to stay alone. I talked with my friend to tell him to come and play with me.

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