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Message de kaleid posté le 09-12-2014 à 15:46:06 (S | E | F)
Bonjour!
Je souhaiterais que quelqu'un, s'il a le temps et la bonté, puisse m'aider à corriger mon texte .
Je remercie d'avance ceux ou celles qui m'aideront!
Sir Winston Leonard Spencer-Churchill was the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom from 1940 to 1945 and again from 1951 to 195 and he was also a soldier of the British Army.He was even know as a one of the greatest wartime leaders of the 20th century who lead a countless number of battle.Sir Winston as the only one British Prime minister who won a Nobel Prize in Literatur and the first person to be made an honorary citizen of the United States of America.He delives is first speech in the front of the house of Parlement on 13 May 1940 after becoming the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom in the first year of World War II.During his speech,urges the members to do their best,to fight with all therir might and strenght and to never give up in order to overcome the difficulties of the war!Moreover,he will also warge the all nation to support the war effort.He keeps on telling to the soldier they have to be relentless,merciless and strong-willed in order to win the war and to protect their friend and family!And the phrase "I have nothing to offer but blood,toil,tears and sweats." bacame famous after this speech.$
Sur ce je vous souhaite à tous une bonne journée!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-12-2014 16:51
Message de kaleid posté le 09-12-2014 à 15:46:06 (S | E | F)
Bonjour!
Je souhaiterais que quelqu'un, s'il a le temps et la bonté, puisse m'aider à corriger mon texte .
Je remercie d'avance ceux ou celles qui m'aideront!
Sir Winston Leonard Spencer-Churchill was the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom from 1940 to 1945 and again from 1951 to 195 and he was also a soldier of the British Army.He was even know as a one of the greatest wartime leaders of the 20th century who lead a countless number of battle.Sir Winston as the only one British Prime minister who won a Nobel Prize in Literatur and the first person to be made an honorary citizen of the United States of America.He delives is first speech in the front of the house of Parlement on 13 May 1940 after becoming the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom in the first year of World War II.During his speech,urges the members to do their best,to fight with all therir might and strenght and to never give up in order to overcome the difficulties of the war!Moreover,he will also warge the all nation to support the war effort.He keeps on telling to the soldier they have to be relentless,merciless and strong-willed in order to win the war and to protect their friend and family!And the phrase "I have nothing to offer but blood,toil,tears and sweats." bacame famous after this speech.$
Sur ce je vous souhaite à tous une bonne journée!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-12-2014 16:51
Réponse: Winston Churchill/aide de yaya18, postée le 09-12-2014 à 17:49:05 (S | E)
Bonjour, voici quelques erreurs que j'ai trouvées : (Erreurs en bleu)
Sir Winston Leonard Spencer-Churchill was the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom from 1940 to 1945 and again from 1951 to 195 and he was also a soldier of the British Army.He was even know as a one of the greatest wartime leaders of the 20th century who lead a countless number of battle.Sir Winston as the only one British Prime minister who won a Nobel Prize in Literatur and the first person to be made an honorary citizen of the United States of America.He delives is first speech in the front of the house of Parlement on 13 May 1940 after becoming the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom in the first year of World War II.During his speech,urges the members to do their best,to fight with all therir might and strenght and to never give up in order to overcome the difficulties of the war!Moreover,he will also warge the all nation to support the war effort.He keeps on telling to the soldier they have to be relentless,merciless and strong-willed in order to win the war and to protect their friend and family!And the phrase "I have nothing to offer but blood,toil,tears and sweats." bacame famous after this speech.$
See you later
Réponse: Winston Churchill/aide de kaleid, postée le 09-12-2014 à 19:16:51 (S | E)
Bonsoir!
Tout d'abord,je tiens à vous remercier de votre aide ^^!
Voici le texte après correction:
Sir Winston Leonard Spencer-Churchill was the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom from 1940 to 1945 and again from 1951 to 1955 and he was also a soldier of the British Army.He was even knew as a one of the greatest wartime leaders of the 20th century who lead a countless number of battle.Sir Winston as the only one British Prime minister who won a Nobel Prize in Literature and the first person to be made an honorary citizen of the United States of America.He delives a first speech in the front of the house of Parlement on 13 May 1940 after becoming the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom in the first year of World War II.During his speech,he urges the members to do their best,to fight with all their might and strenght and to never give up in order to overcome the difficulties of the war!Moreover,he will also warge the all nation to support the war effort.He keeps on telling to the soldier they have to be relentless,merciless and strong-willed in order to win the war and to protect their friends and families!And the phrase "I have nothing to offer but blood,toil,tears and sweats." bacame famous after this speech.
Sur ce je vous souhaite une bonne soirée!
Réponse: Winston Churchill/aide de yaya18, postée le 09-12-2014 à 19:31:30 (S | E)
Rebonjour Kaleid
(Erreurs en bleu)Sir Winston Leonard Spencer-Churchill was the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom from 1940 to 1945 and again from 1951 to 1955 and he was also a soldier of the British Army.He was evenknew (Cela ne convient toujours pas) as a one of the greatest wartime leaders of the 20th century who lead a countless number of battle.Sir Winston as the only one British Prime minister who won a Nobel Prize in Literature and the first person to be made an honorary citizen of the United States of America.He delives a first speech in the front of the house of Parlement on 13 May 1940 after becoming the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom in the first year of World War II.During his speech,he urges the members to do their best,to fight with all their might (je ne vois pas ce que tu veux dire avec ce "might") and strenght and to never give up in order to overcome the difficulties of the war!Moreover,he will also warge the all nation to support the war effort.He keeps on telling to the soldier they have to be relentless,merciless and strong-willed in order to win the war and to protect their friends and families!And the phrase (Trouve une autre tournure) "I have nothing to offer but blood,toil,tears and sweats." bacame (Orthographe) famous after this speech.
Essaye de corriger ces petites fautes
Je vous souhaite une bonne soirée à vous aussi !
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Modifié par yaya18 le 09-12-2014 19:38
Réponse: Winston Churchill/aide de kaleid, postée le 09-12-2014 à 19:43:01 (S | E)
Bonsoir!
Encore une fois,je vous remercie de votre aide ^^!
Re-voilà le texte après correction:
Sir Winston Leonard Spencer-Churchill was the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom from 1940 to 1945 and again from 1951 to 1955 and he was also a soldier of the British Army.He was even known as a one of the greatest wartime leaders of the 20th century who lead a countless number of battle.Sir Winston as the only one British Prime minister who won a Nobel Prize in Literature and the first person to be made an honorary citizen of the United States of America.He delives a first speech in the front of the house of Parlement on 13 May 1940 after becoming the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom in the first year of World War II.During his speech,he urges the members to do their best,to fight with all their wisdom and strenght and to never give up in order to overcome the difficulties of the war!Moreover,he will also warge the all nation to support the war effort.He keeps on telling to the soldier they have to be relentless,merciless and strong-willed in order to win the war and to protect their friends and families!It is when the famous phrase "I have nothing to offer but blood,toil,tears and sweats." appeared.
Réponse: Winston Churchill/aide de gerondif, postée le 09-12-2014 à 19:47:11 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Sir Winston Leonard Spencer-Churchill was the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom from 1940 to 1945 and again from 1951 to 1955 and he was also a soldier of the British Army.He was even knew (participe passé ici!) as a(en trop) one of the greatest wartime leaders of the 20th century who lead a countless number of battle(pluriel, tant qu'à faire!).Sir Winston as(is?) the only
) they have to be relentless,merciless and strong-willed in order to win the war and to protect their friends and families! And the phrase (Trouve une autre tournurePourquoi? c'est correct ) "I have nothing to offer but blood,toil,tears and sweats(singulier, pour une fois de la sueur)." bacame (Orthographe) famous after this speech.Réponse: Winston Churchill/aide de kaleid, postée le 09-12-2014 à 20:10:16 (S | E)
Bonsoir!
Je vous remercie aussi de votre aide !Et dommage pour le croisement de post
!Bon voilà le texte après correction:
Sir Winston Leonard Spencer-Churchill was the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom from 1940 to 1945 and again from 1951 to 1955 and he was also a soldier of the British Army.He was even known as one of the greatest wartime leaders of the 20th century who lead a countless number of battles.Sir Winston is the one British Prime minister who won a Nobel Prize in Literature and the first person to be made an honorary citizen of the United States of America.He delived a first speech in the front of the house of parliamenton 13 May 1940 after becoming the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom in the first year of World War II.During his speech,he urges the members to do their best,to fight with all their might,wisdom and strength and never give up in order to overcome the difficulties of the war!Moreover,he wants also that the all nations support the war effort.He keeps on telling the soldier they have to be relentless,merciless and strong-willed in order to win the war and to protect their friends and families!And the phrase "I have nothing to offer but blood,toil,tears and sweats." became famous after this speech.
Sur ce je vous souhaite une bonne soirée !
Réponse: Winston Churchill/aide de gerondif, postée le 09-12-2014 à 22:30:48 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Sir Winston Leonard Spencer-Churchill was the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom from 1940 to 1945 and again from 1951 to 1955 and he was also a soldier of(plutôt in que of) the British Army.He was even known as one of the greatest wartime leaders of the 20th century who lead a countless number of battles.Sir Winston is the
Réponse: Winston Churchill/aide de kaleid, postée le 09-12-2014 à 23:31:43 (S | E)
Bonsoir!
Encore une fois je vous remercie de votre aide et je m'excuse du fait d'avoir oublié de corriger certaines erreurs!
Sir Winston Leonard Spencer-Churchill was the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom from 1940 to 1945 and again from 1951 to 1955 and he was also a soldier in the British Army.He was even known as one of the greatest wartime leaders of the 20th century who lead a countless number of battles.Sir Winston is the only British Prime minister who won a Nobel Prize in Literature and the first person to be made an honorary citizen of the United States of America. The 13 May 1940,he delivered a first speech in the front of house of parliamentafter becoming the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom in the first year of World War II.During his speech,he urges the members to do their best,to fight with all their might,wisdom and strength and never to give up in order to overcome the difficulties of the war!Moreover,he also wants all the nations support the war effort.He keeps on telling the soldiers they have to be relentless,merciless and strong-willed in order to win the war and to protect their friends and families!And the phrase "I have nothing to offer but blood,toil,tears and sweat." became famous after this speech.
Réponse: Winston Churchill/aide de gerondif, postée le 09-12-2014 à 23:40:00 (S | E)
On y est presque!
Sir Winston Leonard Spencer-Churchill was the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom from 1940 to 1945 and again from 1951 to 1955 and he was also a soldier in the British Army.He was even known as one of the greatest wartime leaders of the 20th century who lead a countless number of battles.Sir Winston is the only British Prime minister who won a Nobel Prize in Literature and the first person to be made an honorary citizen of the United States of America. The 13 May 1940(il fallait garder on, j'ai vu que wikipedia donnait la date comme votre ancienne version, mais puisqu'on parle de Churchill, je l'aurais mise "à l'anglaise", on May 13th, 1940),he delivered a first speech in the(à supprimer!! front of the(à rajouter donc) house of parliament, after becoming the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom in the first year of World War II.During his speech,he urges the members to do their best,to fight with all their might,wisdom and strength and never to give up in order to overcome the difficulties of the war! Moreover,he also wants all the nations TO support the war effort.He keeps on telling the soldiers they have to be relentless,merciless and strong-willed in order to win the war and to protect their friends and families!And the phrase "I have nothing to offer but blood,toil,tears and sweat." became famous after this speech.
Réponse: Winston Churchill/aide de kaleid, postée le 10-12-2014 à 15:21:33 (S | E)
Bonjour!
Encore et toujours je vous remercie de votre aide ^^!
Voilà le texte après correction:
Sir Winston Leonard Spencer-Churchill was the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom from 1940 to 1945 and again from 1951 to 1955 and he was also a soldier in the British Army.He was even known as one of the greatest wartime leaders of the 20th century who lead a countless number of battles.Sir Winston is the only British Prime minister who won a Nobel Prize in Literature and the first person to be made an honorary citizen of the United States of America.He delivered a first speech in front of the house of parliamentafter becoming the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom on May 13th, 1940 .During his speech,he urges the members to do their best,to fight with all their might,wisdom and strength and never to give up in order to overcome the difficulties of the war!Moreover,he also wants all the nations to support the war effort.He keeps on telling the soldiers they have to be relentless,merciless and strong-willed in order to win the war and to protect their friends and families!And the phrase "I have nothing to offer but blood,toil,tears and sweat." became famous after this speech.
Sur ce je vous souhaite une bonne journée!
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