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Message de trauzeur posté le 05-12-2014 à 15:37:24 (S | E | F)
Bonjour.j'ai rédigé un petit devoir concernant un évènement sportif.
Pouvez-vous m'aider à le corriger?
In 2019, Cameroon will be organizing an important edition of the Africa cup of nations. It will the biggest event ever since the last organized in 1972. People have been waiting for years and so it was quite a great joy for every Tom Dick and Harry when the news came out.
We now need to build infrastructures so we can make the grade. As infrastructure, we have stadia, roads, luxurious hotels, high standard of means of communication and so on…
It’s important to highlight the fact that, organizing this competition is part of the reconstruction of our football and above all, the country will benefit of it. Our global economy will considerably grow and this can lead to a whole development.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-12-2014 16:04
Message de trauzeur posté le 05-12-2014 à 15:37:24 (S | E | F)
Bonjour.j'ai rédigé un petit devoir concernant un évènement sportif.
Pouvez-vous m'aider à le corriger?
In 2019, Cameroon will be organizing an important edition of the Africa cup of nations. It will the biggest event ever since the last organized in 1972. People have been waiting for years and so it was quite a great joy for every Tom Dick and Harry when the news came out.
We now need to build infrastructures so we can make the grade. As infrastructure, we have stadia, roads, luxurious hotels, high standard of means of communication and so on…
It’s important to highlight the fact that, organizing this competition is part of the reconstruction of our football and above all, the country will benefit of it. Our global economy will considerably grow and this can lead to a whole development.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-12-2014 16:04
Réponse: Correction/sport de gerondif, postée le 05-12-2014 à 15:47:52 (S | E)
Bonjouir,
In 2019, Cameroon will be organizing an important edition of the Africa cup of nations. It will(manque la base verbale du verbe être) the biggest event ever since the last (manque le pronom one) organized in 1972. People have been waiting for years and so it was quite a great joy for every Tom Dick and Harry when the news came out.
We now need to build infrastructures so we can make the grade. As infrastructure, we have stadia (?pluriel de stadium?), roads, luxurious hotels, high standard of means of communication and so on…
It’s important to highlight the fact that, organizing this competition is part of the reconstruction of our football and above all, the country will benefit of(construction: to benefit from) it. Our global economy will considerably grow and this can lead to a whole development.
whole ne va pas car il signifie non pas complet au sens de complete mais complet au sens de en entier, et donc "un entièrement developpement, un développement en entier " ne veut rien dire, il faut changer d'adjectif, un changement réel, radical, significatif, à grande échelle ....
Réponse: Correction/sport de trauzeur, postée le 05-12-2014 à 16:04:54 (S | E)
Réponse: Correction/sport de trauzeur, postée le 05-12-2014 à 16:22:10 (S | E)
Bonjour.
Juste une question. En fait c'est moi qui réponds à votre question sur un mot de mon texte? we have stadia (? pluriel de stadium?)je réponds par l'affirmative.
Est-ce oui ou non la mauvaise forme? Si oui, y a t-il une autre forme?
Merci.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-12-2014 18:26
Réponse: Correction/sport de gerondif, postée le 05-12-2014 à 16:36:01 (S | E)
Voilà ce que l'on trouve en tapant stadia sous Google:
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Stadia may refer to:
One of the plurals of stadium; "stadiums" is also used.
Stadia (length), an ancient unit of distance
Stadia mark, marks on a telescopic sight's reticle that permit stadiametric rangefinding or altitude measurements
Stadia rod, a related surveying tool used with telescopic based survey instruments
Stadiametric rangefinding, a way of measuring distance using a telescope and triangulation
Helsinki Polytechnic Stadia, a multidisciplinary institution of higher education in Finland
il y a par contre 26 millions de résultats sous "stadiums"
Welcome to World Stadiums!
We are proud to present you the most comprehensive stadium database on the net, which currently contains more than 12 000 stadiums in over 224 countries.
Autant media ne me choque pas par rapport à medium, autant stadia me paraît "far-fetched".
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