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Message de sam44 posté le 15-10-2014 à 10:42:52 (S | E | F)
Hello,
I'm Samantha, I'm 17 and I'd like someone could help me to translate a sentence for a tattoo because I want no error. Sorry my English isn't perfect, I know...
Thanks for any reply.
My sentence in French is "tes parents t'ont donné ton premier souffle, accompagne les jusqu'à leur dernier".
Is this translation ok ? "your parents gave you the first breath of life, be with them until their last one".
But I prefer the word "accompany" instead of "be with", which one makes more sense?
Goodbye, have a great day!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-10-2014 10:59
Message de sam44 posté le 15-10-2014 à 10:42:52 (S | E | F)
Hello,
I'm Samantha, I'm 17 and I'd like someone could help me to translate a sentence for a tattoo because I want no error. Sorry my English isn't perfect, I know...
Thanks for any reply.
My sentence in French is "tes parents t'ont donné ton premier souffle, accompagne les jusqu'à leur dernier".
Is this translation ok ? "your parents gave you the first breath of life, be with them until their last one".
But I prefer the word "accompany" instead of "be with", which one makes more sense?
Goodbye, have a great day!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-10-2014 10:59
Réponse: Tatouage/aide de tdu6300, postée le 16-10-2014 à 02:35:47 (S | E)
Bonjour
"your parents gave you the (ton) first breath of life, be with them until their last one".
But I prefer the word "accompany" instead of "be with", which one makes more sense?
As far as I am concerned, I like "be with them..." but I think both make sense.
You may also try "remain", "stay", etc...
Best regards
Réponse: Tatouage/aide de sam44, postée le 16-10-2014 à 09:18:31 (S | E)
Bonjour, merci pour la réponse ^^
Vous avez raison, logiquement ça devrait être "your parents gave you your first breath of life" mais j'aime pas trop les deux "you" collés..
Donc à moins que vous ayez une meilleure idée, ma phrase définitive sera:
"Your parents gave you the first breath of life, be/stay (je sais pas trop) with them until their last one"
Qu'en pensez-vous?
Bonne journée!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-10-2014 10:18
Réponse: Tatouage/aide de traviskidd, postée le 16-10-2014 à 12:14:12 (S | E)
Hello. I would say:
"Your parents gave you (your first) breath; be there for them until their last."
See you.
Réponse: Tatouage/aide de sam44, postée le 17-10-2014 à 11:22:07 (S | E)
Ah merci de votre réponse, comme ça c'est très bien sans ( your first )!
bonne journée
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-10-2014 12:53
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