Aide/favourite movie
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Message de makachar2 posté le 03-05-2014 à 20:11:07 (S | E | F)
Salut Bonjour,
j'ai bientôt un examen oral en anglais et je voudrais savoir si vous pourriez m'indiquer mes fautes.
Merci pour vos réponses.
Tell a blind person about your favourite movie :
My Favorite movie ...
Without hesitation " Into the Wild " that is a deeply moving and captivating film !
This is the story of a young graduate leaving alone with his backpack , dropping his studies, his family and friends for a journey to Alaska (via Arizona Dakota )to learn ( to the hard way) the basics of wildlife in its wilderness .
One of the great successes of the film, it is the fact that meetings "Alexander Supertramp " with colorful characters , either with hippies, a young farmer where a benevolent old man
(I won't forget her application to adopt the son he never had ) .
"Into the Wild" is also beautiful landscapes in a wilderness , consuming , elusive and
beautifully filmed.
This film inspires me so much ...
I really want to do this long journey , the first time I saw this movie, I was 10 years old , and the next day I told my parents ' later I want to want to go away from here in nature, as in " into the wild " , I still have the same ambitions and projects , it is a masterpiece simply !
In addition , the film is inspired by a true story.I would like to see such beautiful things before I die !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-05-2014 20:36
Message de makachar2 posté le 03-05-2014 à 20:11:07 (S | E | F)
j'ai bientôt un examen oral en anglais et je voudrais savoir si vous pourriez m'indiquer mes fautes.
Merci pour vos réponses.
Tell a blind person about your favourite movie :
My Favorite movie ...
Without hesitation " Into the Wild " that is a deeply moving and captivating film !
This is the story of a young graduate leaving alone with his backpack , dropping his studies, his family and friends for a journey to Alaska (via Arizona Dakota )to learn ( to the hard way) the basics of wildlife in its wilderness .
One of the great successes of the film, it is the fact that meetings "Alexander Supertramp " with colorful characters , either with hippies, a young farmer where a benevolent old man
(I won't forget her application to adopt the son he never had ) .
"Into the Wild" is also beautiful landscapes in a wilderness , consuming , elusive and
beautifully filmed.
This film inspires me so much ...
I really want to do this long journey , the first time I saw this movie, I was 10 years old , and the next day I told my parents ' later I want to want to go away from here in nature, as in " into the wild " , I still have the same ambitions and projects , it is a masterpiece simply !
In addition , the film is inspired by a true story.I would like to see such beautiful things before I die !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-05-2014 20:36
Réponse: Aide/favourite movie de makachar2, postée le 03-05-2014 à 23:38:34 (S | E)
pas de réponse??
Réponse: Aide/favourite movie de gerondif, postée le 05-05-2014 à 16:46:56 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Méfiez-vous du traducteur qui traduit ce qu'il voit:
a young farmer where a benevolent old man : un jeune agriculteur où un vieil homme bienveillant: where ou or? où ou ou ?
erreurs en bleu
My Favorite movie ...
Without hesitation " Into the Wild " that is a deeply moving and captivating film !
This is the story of a young graduate leaving alone with his backpack , dropping his studies, his family and friends for a journey to Alaska (via Arizona Dakota )to learn ( to the hard way) the basics of wildlife in its wilderness .
One of the great successes of the film, it is the fact that meetings "Alexander Supertramp " with colorful characters , either with hippies, a young farmer where a benevolent old man
(I won't forget her(her ou his ? c'était his en ligne 3) application to adopt the son he never had ) .
"Into the Wild" is also beautiful landscapes in a wilderness , consuming , elusive and
beautifully filmed.T(ordre des mots)
his film inspires me so much ...
I really want to do this long journey , the first time I saw this movie, I was 10 years old , and the next day I told my parents ' later I want
In addition , the film is inspired by a true story.I would like to see such beautiful things before I die !
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Modifié par gerondif le 05-05-2014 16:48
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