Correction/ erreurs

Correction/ erreurs
Message de snakest posté le 20-03-2014 à 19:04:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,

Je viens de passer un examen, et j'ai complètement raté la partie de reconnaissance d'erreurs. J'aurais voulu savoir si quelqu'un pouvait m'en donner une correction svp s'il vous plaît. J'ai un total de 20 phrases.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-03-2014 22:30

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Réponse: Correction/ erreurs de sbgs, postée le 20-03-2014 à 19:19:36 (S | E)
Hello,
tu peux toujours mettre les 20 phrases sur lesquelles tu as été évalué, les membres du forum pourront te corriger.

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Réponse: Correction/ erreurs de snakest, postée le 20-03-2014 à 19:20:43 (S | E)
Hello !
Je vais faire ça Je tape et je poste

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Réponse: Correction/ erreurs de snakest, postée le 20-03-2014 à 20:04:43 (S | E)
Merci pour votre aide.
Voici donc les 20 phrases.
Les propositions d'erreurs sont en majuscules.

1 - copyright law clearly STATED that you have TO HAVE the PERMISSION OF the authors or the publishers BEFORE COPYING their work.
2 - WHEN YOU SHOW HIM your LETTERS OF RECOMMENDATIONS, i'm sure he WILL NOT HESITANT to give you the salary THAT YOU WANT.
3 - THE staff WORKED THROUGHOUT NIGHT to meet the CLIENT'S deadline.
4 - we WILL BE TRAVELING with the vice president and his wife THEY ARE MEMBERS of the FINANCE COMMITTEE for the new ARTS CENTER.
5 - i think it WOULD BE EASIER to hold the AUDIENCE'S ATTETION if you HAD a slide show ALONG TO the lecture.
6 - INITIAL we were very anxious to start the computer seminar, but WE FOUND it SO DIFFICULT that we EVENTUALLY withdrew.
7 - DID YOU KNOW THAT you can save UP TO 25 PERCENT in DISABLE INSURANCE IF YOU ARE a non-smoker ?
8 - HAVING BEEN TO BARCELONA TWICE HIMSELF, bob TOLD US last week THAT AQUATICS SPORT are becoming INCREASINGLY POPULAR there.
9 - GONE THROUGH the folders ONE BY ONE, we were able TO FIND the missing invoice in the STORAGE DRAWER.
10 - REMEMBER THE BACKLOG from loast year, THE STAFF DECIDED to work A LITTLE OVERTIME every day TO AVOID A RECURRENCE.
11 - YOUR PAYCHECK for last week GIVEN to theHEAD OF your departement TO PASS ON TO you.
12 - the computer has MISTAKENLY canceled your CLUB MEMBERSHIP but it can BE REINSTATE by tonight or tomorrow AT THE LATEST.
13 - jeff and gloria WENT TO PICK OUT carpeting and decoration, INCLUDING FURNITURES; for the new vip LOUNGE that WAS OPENING on the third floor.
14 - WHEN WE ENTERING tokyo proper, WE DROVE right THROUGH A TUNNEL that OPENED INTO the royal gardiens.
15 - she REPEATED BECAUSE SHE DID NOT WANT any of her money INVESTED in the heavily advertised, but HIGH-RISK COMPANIES.
16 - biologist ARE ALWAYS SEARCH for INSIGHTS INTO the NATURE OF the human CELL.
17 - ALL THINGS CONSIDERED, the inclement WEATHERS this month HASN'T SIGNIFICATLY decreased productivity OF THE STAFF.
18 - these INTERESTED paintings WERE DONATED to the library BY the gilmore foundation OVER TWENTY YEARS AGO.
19 - the museum director was NEITHER FRIENDLY OR professional IN HIS APPROACH to the INTERESTED STUDENTS and their TEACHER.
20 - the deputy officer WAS CHARGED with LOOKING AT OVER the files TO find other evidence of WRONGDOING.

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Réponse: Correction/ erreurs de gerondif, postée le 21-03-2014 à 19:04:58 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Voici donc les 20 phrases.
Les propositions d'erreurs sont en majuscules.(ce sont donc vos propositions d'erreurs?)
1 - copyright law clearly STATED that you have TO HAVE the PERMISSION OF the authors or the publishers BEFORE COPYING their work.
2 - WHEN YOU SHOW HIM your LETTERS OF RECOMMENDATIONS, I'm sure he WILL NOT HESITANT to give you the salary THAT YOU WANT.
3 - THE staff WORKED THROUGHOUT the NIGHT(all night, all night through) to meet the CLIENT(customer)'S deadline.
4 - we WILL BE TRAVELING with the vice president and his wife THEY ARE MEMBERS of the FINANCE COMMITTEE for the new ARTS CENTER.
5 - i think it WOULD BE EASIER to hold the AUDIENCE'S ATTENTION if you HAD a slide show ALONG TO (along with, together with))the lecture.
6 - INITIAL we were very anxious to start the computer seminar, but WE FOUND it SO DIFFICULT that we EVENTUALLY withdrew.
7 - DID YOU KNOW THAT you can save UP TO 25 PERCENT in DISABLE INSURANCE Google donne disability insurance) IF YOU ARE a non-smoker ?
8 - HAVING BEEN(being tout seul irait) TO BARCELONA TWICE HIMSELF, bob TOLD US last week THAT AQUATICS SPORTS are becoming INCREASINGLY POPULAR there.
9 - GONE(going) THROUGH the folders ONE BY ONE, we were able TO FIND the missing invoice in the STORAGE DRAWER.
10 - REMEMBERing THE BACKLOG from last year, THE STAFF DECIDED to work A LITTLE OVERTIME every day TO AVOID A RECURRENCE.
11 - YOUR PAYCHECK for last week was(has been) GIVEN to the HEAD OF your departement TO PASS ON TO you.
12 - the computer has MISTAKENLY canceled your CLUB MEMBERSHIP but it can BE REINSTATEd by tonight or tomorrow AT THE LATEST.
13 - jeff and gloria WENT TO PICK OUT carpeting and decoration, INCLUDING FURNITURES; for the new vip LOUNGE that WAS(futur) OPENING on the third floor.
14 - WHEN WE ENTERING tokyo proper, WE DROVE right THROUGH A TUNNEL that OPENED INTO the royal gardiens.
15 - she REPEATED BECAUSE SHE DID NOT WANT any of her money (to be)INVESTED in the heavily advertised, but HIGH-RISK COMPANIES.
16 - biologists ARE ALWAYS(still: encore au sens de toujours) SEARCH for (looking for)INSIGHTS INTO the NATURE OF the human CELL.
17 - ALL THINGS CONSIDERED, the inclement WEATHERS this month HASN'T SIGNIFICAnTLY decreased productivity OF THE STAFF.
18 - these INTERESTED paintings WERE DONATED to the library BY the gilmore foundation OVER TWENTY YEARS AGO.
19 - the museum director was NEITHER FRIENDLY NOR professional IN HIS APPROACH to the INTERESTED STUDENTS and their TEACHER.
20 - the deputy officer WAS CHARGED with (signifierait accusé de/ in charge of)LOOKING AT OVER the files TO find other evidence of WRONGDOING.
je pense que je n'ai pas tout vu.....

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Réponse: Correction/ erreurs de snakest, postée le 24-03-2014 à 00:44:45 (S | E)
oui c'est ca, en majuscule les propositions d'erreurs, il y a 4 parties en majuscules, 3 juste, 1 erreur, il faut trouver cette erreur ^^. Merci bien c'est sympa de ta part

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