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Message de lili97kat posté le 15-03-2014 à 12:42:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger mon texte, s'il vous plaît?
Merci pour votre aide.
On the one hand, throughout years, according to period, the term of hero definite someone precise. Before, hero was definited like a person who save life of people. Nowadays, he can be considerated like someone who are created a new invention, which in a way help people in their living conditions.
On the other hand, history spell each century in a way different with his evolutions. Each decade have his own hero. The slaves liberators were heroes, and nowadays they are always. But we possess from now on others types of heroes like inventors, the mobile phone for example. At present even if someone is far of us, we can call him in five seconds and we have a phone conversation with him.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-03-2014 17:45
Message de lili97kat posté le 15-03-2014 à 12:42:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger mon texte, s'il vous plaît?
Merci pour votre aide.
On the one hand, throughout years, according to period, the term of hero definite someone precise. Before, hero was definited like a person who save life of people. Nowadays, he can be considerated like someone who are created a new invention, which in a way help people in their living conditions.
On the other hand, history spell each century in a way different with his evolutions. Each decade have his own hero. The slaves liberators were heroes, and nowadays they are always. But we possess from now on others types of heroes like inventors, the mobile phone for example. At present even if someone is far of us, we can call him in five seconds and we have a phone conversation with him.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-03-2014 17:45
Réponse: Correction / Hero de kathryn, postée le 15-03-2014 à 22:13:46 (S | E)
Hello,
On the one hand, throughout years, according to period, the term of hero definite (wrong word) someone precise(wrong form of word.) Before, hero was definited(same word choice error) like a person who save (tense) life of people. Nowadays, he can be considerated (form of word) like someone who
On the other hand, history spell (wrong word) each century in a way different with his (its, no gender here, for English) evolutions. Each decade have (3rd sing. needed) his (no gender) own hero. The slaves liberators were heroes, and nowadays they are always (word choice) But we possess from now on other
Please correct and resubmit. Bonne chance et Bon travail!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-03-2014 22:15
Colours fixed.
Réponse: Correction / Hero de lili97kat, postée le 16-03-2014 à 08:14:57 (S | E)
Hello,
On the one hand, throughout years, according to period, the term of hero define someone precised. Before, hero was defined like a person who save people's life. Nowadays, he can be considerate as someone who are created for a new invention, which in a way helps people in their living conditions.
On the other hand, history write each century in a way different with evolutions. Each decade has own hero. The slaves liberators were heroes, and nowadays they are still. Nevertheless we possess from now on others types of heroes like inventors of the mobile phone for example. At present even if someone is far from us, we can call him in five seconds and we can have a phone conversation with him.
I hope it's better, thank you!
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