Article/meurtre et FBI
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Message de english1408 posté le 02-02-2014 à 14:28:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois rédiger un article sur un meurtre, voici ce que j'ai fait.
Pouvez-vous corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît ?
Merci d'avance ;)
Three months, three murders.
A killer in nature.
The bodies of three women have been found in November and December last in Minnesota, in Minneapolis. Kathie Johnson, Cathie Robinson and Martha Lundquist have all three were found dead in a parking lot. The FBI secure that victims were strangled.
The killer is still unknown but the FBI assume he chose only blond women with hair courst with large bright eyes for victims.
It is Believed That The driveway killer has also struck in Iowa, Missouri and Arkansas. The FBI recommends that all women exercise caution when leaving their home, the killer can be from anywhere.
It could be you or someone in your entourange, be careful. If you see something wrong immediately notify the FBI.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-02-2014 14:29
Message de english1408 posté le 02-02-2014 à 14:28:41 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je dois rédiger un article sur un meurtre, voici ce que j'ai fait.
Pouvez-vous corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît ?
Merci d'avance ;)
Three months, three murders.
A killer in nature.
The bodies of three women have been found in November and December last in Minnesota, in Minneapolis. Kathie Johnson, Cathie Robinson and Martha Lundquist have all three were found dead in a parking lot. The FBI secure that victims were strangled.
The killer is still unknown but the FBI assume he chose only blond women with hair courst with large bright eyes for victims.
It is Believed That The driveway killer has also struck in Iowa, Missouri and Arkansas. The FBI recommends that all women exercise caution when leaving their home, the killer can be from anywhere.
It could be you or someone in your entourange, be careful. If you see something wrong immediately notify the FBI.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-02-2014 14:29
Réponse: Article/meurtre et FBI de gerondif, postée le 02-02-2014 à 14:47:56 (S | E)
Bonjour,
je pense que vous avez fait cela au traducteur automatique car quand vous vous plantez en orthographe française, le robot fait de même et laisse les mots tels quels dans le texte: cf cheveux courst et son entourange.
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