Correction /in Texas
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Message de yasminealami posté le 05-01-2014 à 23:27:12 (S | E | F)
Hi everybody;
this is my first post here,I am happy and I wish I could help others and that they could help me as well.
I need some correction for a paragraph I wrote in order to summerize the W-H questions for one of the O.Henry's stories, Hearts and Crosses.Thank you for your help.
In the west Texas,exactly in the nopalito ranch,Webb Yeager,Husbind of Santa Yeager who was before marrying him Santa McAllister ,the next cattle queen of west texas,decides to leave his wife in order to become as he said "a man again",following his friend's advice,Baldy,he travells to the southeast to be a foreman in the seco ranch .the fact that Webb was not in charge of the business after his marriage -in contrast to his wife-made him feel angry ,after several months of his disappearnce ,a business letter comes to his wife in his name,a letter that awakened her feelings and made her send him their their sign of a heart and a cross inside it as to say "come to me!",a sign that as usual succeeded in softenning his heart and after which he came back immediately to discover that his wife does not want to be a queen anymore ,and that she left this mission to their new babyborn.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-01-2014 09:11
Message de yasminealami posté le 05-01-2014 à 23:27:12 (S | E | F)
Hi everybody;
this is my first post here,I am happy and I wish I could help others and that they could help me as well.
I need some correction for a paragraph I wrote in order to summerize the W-H questions for one of the O.Henry's stories, Hearts and Crosses.Thank you for your help.
In the west Texas,exactly in the nopalito ranch,Webb Yeager,Husbind of Santa Yeager who was before marrying him Santa McAllister ,the next cattle queen of west texas,decides to leave his wife in order to become as he said "a man again",following his friend's advice,Baldy,he travells to the southeast to be a foreman in the seco ranch .the fact that Webb was not in charge of the business after his marriage -in contrast to his wife-made him feel angry ,after several months of his disappearnce ,a business letter comes to his wife in his name,a letter that awakened her feelings and made her send him their their sign of a heart and a cross inside it as to say "come to me!",a sign that as usual succeeded in softenning his heart and after which he came back immediately to discover that his wife does not want to be a queen anymore ,and that she left this mission to their new babyborn.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-01-2014 09:11
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