Cinq erreurs/texte

Cinq erreurs/texte
Message de mar4gaux posté le 13-12-2013 à 19:24:27 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pour mardi j'ai un petit texte sur une photo où dans lequel il faut y insérer 5 erreurs.
Pouvez-vous m'aider à le corriger, s'il vous plait?
Merci beaucoup d'avance.

This add was created by the government to denounce the pollution and the lack of respect. The government wants people to keep Britain untidy.
On this awareness campaign, we can see a young man who has a cow nose. He may have just eat junk food which is behind him.
It denounce the fact that old people don't give attention to the respect of the earth and don't want to keep Britain tidy.
We can think that the future generations will be very good models for their children.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-12-2013 21:04

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Réponse: Cinq erreurs/texte de gerondif, postée le 13-12-2013 à 19:52:00 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
il faut y insérer ou retrouver les erreurs? je vois 5 erreurs de grammaire et deux de sens, donc pas la peine d'en insérer plus!!

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Réponse: Cinq erreurs/texte de mar4gaux, postée le 16-12-2013 à 16:51:50 (S | E)
De grammaire ce n'est pas normale ^^'

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Réponse: Cinq erreurs/texte de gerondif, postée le 16-12-2013 à 18:23:10 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
grammaire sens

This add was created by the government to denounce the pollution and the lack of respect. The government wants people to keep Britain untidy.
On this awareness campaign, we can see a young man who has a cow nose. He may have just eat junk food which is behind him.
It denounce the fact that old people don't give(pay) attention to the respect of the earth and don't want to keep Britain tidy.
We can think that the future generations will be very good models for their children.

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