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Message de mery posté le 11-11-2013 à 15:38:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde,
J'ai un travail à faire et j'aimerais bien que vous corrigiez les fautes s'il vous plaît . C'est une description d'une personne.
Merci pour votre aide.
I would like to talk about my best friend Nezha. I am so lucky to have her.
Nezha is tall and slender. She is 24 years old. She has long, brown, wavy hair. And she has a big brown eyes. She is quite beautiful, especially when she smiles. She is sociable and friendly. All people do love her, and you will find her smiling all the time.
Usually she wears jeans, shirt and sneakers. when it is cold she wears a black or blue coat. She likes dark colors so much.
Today, is my birthday. Nezha is very special, is wearing a beautiful red dress and black high heels, she is like a princess.
I hope our friendship will be long and won't ever end.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-11-2013 15:48
Message de mery posté le 11-11-2013 à 15:38:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde,
J'ai un travail à faire et j'aimerais bien que vous corrigiez les fautes s'il vous plaît . C'est une description d'une personne.
Merci pour votre aide.
I would like to talk about my best friend Nezha. I am so lucky to have her.
Nezha is tall and slender. She is 24 years old. She has long, brown, wavy hair. And she has a big brown eyes. She is quite beautiful, especially when she smiles. She is sociable and friendly. All people do love her, and you will find her smiling all the time.
Usually she wears jeans, shirt and sneakers. when it is cold she wears a black or blue coat. She likes dark colors so much.
Today, is my birthday. Nezha is very special, is wearing a beautiful red dress and black high heels, she is like a princess.
I hope our friendship will be long and won't ever end.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-11-2013 15:48
Réponse: Description/personne de gerondif, postée le 11-11-2013 à 20:07:14 (S | E)
Hello,
I would like to talk about my best friend Nezha. I am so lucky to have her.
Nezha is tall and slender. She is 24 years old. She has long, brown, wavy hair. And she has a(à enlever, elle en a deux) big brown eyes. She is quite beautiful, especially when she smiles. She is sociable and friendly. All people (on dit plutôt everybody + verbe au singulier, do n'est pas obligatoire sauf en forme d'insistance)do love her, and you will find her smiling all the time.
She usually wears jeans, a shirt and sneakers. When it is cold she wears a black or blue coat. She likes dark colors so much.
Today is my birthday (un peu hors sujet sauf si vous vouliez dire qu'elle s'est habillée chic pour vous)). Nezha is very special, she is wearing a beautiful red dress and black high heels, she is like a princess.
I hope our friendship will be long and won't ever end (will never end est plus courant).
Réponse: Description/personne de mery, postée le 12-11-2013 à 09:25:28 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup. j'espère que c'est bon maintenant !!!
I would like to talk about my best friend Nezha. I am so lucky to have her.
Nezha is tall and slender. She is 24 years old. She has long, brown, wavy hair. And she has big brown eyes. She is quite beautiful, especially when she smiles. She is sociable and friendly. Everybody love her, and you will find her smiling all the time.
She usually wears jeans, a shirt and sneakers. When it is cold she wears a black or blue coat. She likes dark colors so much.
I hope our friendship will be long and won't ever end (will never end est plus courant). ( qu'est-ce que je dois mettre a sa place s'il vous plaît? )
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-11-2013 14:34
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