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Message de tazzmanie posté le 11-11-2013 à 13:30:15 (S | E | F)
Bonjour ,
pour demain je dois inventer un super hero et le présenter. Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger mes erreurs s'il vous plaît ?
Merci d'avance.
Voici mon texte :
Presentation:
My superhero was Beast Flame and is alter-ego was Kelly Tomlinson. She have twenty years old and she is a law student. It's a normal girl , she have dark hair and green eyes. She is very generous and always lends to help his friends. She is Irish and lives at Dublin.
Its origins :
One day , she received a mysterious package with no name or address. It was an African mask , but it turned out to have unexpected powers. When she puts the mask she have superpower. Now it protects againt Dublin criminal , while fighting against the evil plans of Hellbolt who wants to steal his mask.
His superpower :
She can jump very high and run more faster than Usain Bolt. It can also climb on all surfaces. It has the power to control and manipulate fire , for example , it can create fireballs. She can also control animals, so that obey these orders.
Her outfit :
She wearing a black and green bodysuit with an utility belt. She wearing the mask. The emblem on its trunk represents an African god.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-11-2013 14:49
Message de tazzmanie posté le 11-11-2013 à 13:30:15 (S | E | F)
Bonjour ,
pour demain je dois inventer un super hero et le présenter. Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger mes erreurs s'il vous plaît ?
Merci d'avance.
Voici mon texte :
Presentation:
My superhero was Beast Flame and is alter-ego was Kelly Tomlinson. She have twenty years old and she is a law student. It's a normal girl , she have dark hair and green eyes. She is very generous and always lends to help his friends. She is Irish and lives at Dublin.
Its origins :
One day , she received a mysterious package with no name or address. It was an African mask , but it turned out to have unexpected powers. When she puts the mask she have superpower. Now it protects againt Dublin criminal , while fighting against the evil plans of Hellbolt who wants to steal his mask.
His superpower :
She can jump very high and run more faster than Usain Bolt. It can also climb on all surfaces. It has the power to control and manipulate fire , for example , it can create fireballs. She can also control animals, so that obey these orders.
Her outfit :
She wearing a black and green bodysuit with an utility belt. She wearing the mask. The emblem on its trunk represents an African god.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-11-2013 14:49
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