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Message de pab11 posté le 13-10-2013 à 14:33:06 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,,
Pouvez-vous corriger ma production écrite s'il vous plaît?
Je vous en remercie d'avance.
"Advertising is the art of convincing people to spend money they don’t have for something they don’t need » :
Will Rogers says that « advertising is the art of convincing people to spend money they don’t have for something they don’t need », is it true or false ? I can't say, but I think that everyone has his or her own opinion on this topic.
To my mind, first of all, I think that nobody can force someone to buy something he o she does not really need because, people have to control themselves: though it is easier to tell than to do. Everyday we see many sorts of advertising whether it is at home, in the street, on the internet, or on the newspaper. Our minds are permanently teased and catched. By the way, we also hear about a new product by the world-of-mouth. We are always looking forward to a new product in the advert. Why we do that ? Because we desperately want to be fashionable, on the cutting edge of technology. So advertising is a great medium to promote things in order for people to spend their money. It also could be misleading advertising but producers do everything to find good ideas to sell their product. In any case, everyone is free to do what he or she wants. The advert is just here to talk people into doing something.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-10-2013 14:45
Message de pab11 posté le 13-10-2013 à 14:33:06 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,,
Pouvez-vous corriger ma production écrite s'il vous plaît?
Je vous en remercie d'avance.
"Advertising is the art of convincing people to spend money they don’t have for something they don’t need » :
Will Rogers says that « advertising is the art of convincing people to spend money they don’t have for something they don’t need », is it true or false ? I can't say, but I think that everyone has his or her own opinion on this topic.
To my mind, first of all, I think that nobody can force someone to buy something he o she does not really need because, people have to control themselves: though it is easier to tell than to do. Everyday we see many sorts of advertising whether it is at home, in the street, on the internet, or on the newspaper. Our minds are permanently teased and catched. By the way, we also hear about a new product by the world-of-mouth. We are always looking forward to a new product in the advert. Why we do that ? Because we desperately want to be fashionable, on the cutting edge of technology. So advertising is a great medium to promote things in order for people to spend their money. It also could be misleading advertising but producers do everything to find good ideas to sell their product. In any case, everyone is free to do what he or she wants. The advert is just here to talk people into doing something.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-10-2013 14:45
Réponse: Correction /advertising de aneth-estragon, postée le 13-10-2013 à 19:56:42 (S | E)
Hello,
Trois choses à revoir en priorité :
La conjugaison de "catch" (verbe irrégulier)
La construction de la forme interrogative : Why (...) we do that ? (il manque un mot)
... because people have to control themselves = en français ça donnerait "personne ne peut forcer quelqu'un à acheter quelque chose parce qu'il faut que les gens se contrôlent."
Est-ce vraiment ce que vous vouliez dire ?
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Modifié par aneth-estragon le 13-10-2013 19:57
Réponse: Correction /advertising de violet91, postée le 14-10-2013 à 00:03:18 (S | E)
Pas de suivi ? J'ai supprimé tous mes conseils .Réponse: Correction /advertising de lucile83, postée le 14-10-2013 à 00:55:54 (S | E)
Pas de suivi ? J'ai supprimé tous mes conseils .
Wow!
c'est super sympa pour ce jeune! 
violet! Réponse: Correction /advertising de alanya, postée le 14-10-2013 à 01:44:09 (S | E)
Hello,
En anglais on dit " but it is easier said than done" rather than (au lieu de)"though it is easier to tell than to do".
Il n'y a pas une grande différence dans la signification de "to say" et "to tell" mais quand on regarde à l'utilisation de ces deux mots dans la langue anglaise on voit qu'elles sont différentes et ces deux mots ne peuvent pas être utilisés de manière interchangeable.
- "say" est utilisé sans mentionner la personne à qui l'on dit, mais si une personne est mentionnée the "to" is used afer "say".
EX: She sais to John she was going to the market.
- "tell" est suivi par la personne à qui on dit.
Ex: She told John she was going to the market.
Dans votre phrase, si vous vouliez utiliser "tell" vous auriez dû dire: "But it is easier to tell PEOPLE than doing so"
Plus complexe, mais je pense que cette explication sera un bon départ. Bon courage!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-10-2013 08:46
Réponse: Correction /advertising de alanya, postée le 14-10-2013 à 01:50:08 (S | E)
Correction... traduction...
- "say" est utilisé sans mentionner la personne à qui l'on dit mais, si une personne est mentionnée "to" est utilisé après "say"
Désolée, mais l'anglais est la langue que j'utilise au quotidien et parfois elle revient au galop... c'est ce qui s'est passé :-)
Réponse: Correction /advertising de notrepere, postée le 14-10-2013 à 04:48:51 (S | E)
Hello alanyaJust a minor correction, we say: it is easier said than done
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