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Message de sziia posté le 01-10-2013 à 00:26:07 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je suis en 3éme année de droit en erasmus et mercredi je passe à l'oral et je voudrais savoir si je n'ai pas fait de fautes dans ma préparation qui se trouve ci-dessous.
Merci d'avance.
I am explain to you how to establish a bank in France.
The banking activities in France knew a development more later and more difficult than in the nearby countries as Italy or the Netherlands.
The first important banks emerged to the nineteenth century with the Credit Lyonnais and the Société Générale. During this period the majority of banks was going to be established by strangers and jews because of the fact that in the christian morality it was forbidden to make a profit on money.
The banks were created in the purpose of to fill numerous functions as to manage means of payment, to assure the security financial transactions, grant a credit, and the bank serve as intermediary on financial markets
In France everybody is free to create an bank if the conditions are respected.
The bank has a particular status provided in the Monetary and financial Code which fix the conditions to be able to establish a bank.
It is necessary humans means that is to say at the very least two person resident in France without judicial history and with skills as regards financial and legal.
Shareholders can come complete human capital in investing to get actions within the bank.
Then share capital changes according to the category of the credit institution but it stays ever high.For example it is necessary to have 5 millions euros to set up a mutualist bank.
The banking activity as a commercial by nature must be exercised in commercial society form
Once the thorough conditions is set, the new institution must get approval of the Authority of Prudential control and Resolution
For to grant the approval the Authority of Prudential control and Resolution take into account notably :
-The program of activity of the company applicant
-technical and financial means that the company to planning of to implement
-The quality of the providers of capital
-The capacity of the company at to realize its objectives of development
After to have succeed at to create a bank it is necessary to know how to manage it to make a profit and avoid the fall (krash). Nowadays the new majority of banks are online bankings.
For to develop a bank it is necessary first of all to constitute an important customer composed either private individual or professional coming to deposit their money at the bank.
To attract of numerous customers it's important to have the interest rate more interesting than the others banks it is what we call the report to the competition. A bank can differ by setting up a effective strategy as for example to use the financial innovation
The communication strategy of a bank is important to attract customers. Especially since a few years the banking sector knew numerous scandals so the customers are more suspicious. The bank must meet the new expectations of its customers
There are mainly three type of banks, banks controlled by the state or national bank, private bank only for prestigious customers, and of course commercial banks for local economy and classic customers
The main difficulty in a good developing, is strict and many controls. They are practised by acpr, who to see to after a good application of a monetary and financial code.
The controls are exercised on the situation of the managers of banks, banking analysis to prevent of risk, The respect for the requirements of solvency, on the financial situation of banks
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-10-2013 06:59
Message de sziia posté le 01-10-2013 à 00:26:07 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je suis en 3éme année de droit en erasmus et mercredi je passe à l'oral et je voudrais savoir si je n'ai pas fait de fautes dans ma préparation qui se trouve ci-dessous.
Merci d'avance.
I am explain to you how to establish a bank in France.
The banking activities in France knew a development more later and more difficult than in the nearby countries as Italy or the Netherlands.
The first important banks emerged to the nineteenth century with the Credit Lyonnais and the Société Générale. During this period the majority of banks was going to be established by strangers and jews because of the fact that in the christian morality it was forbidden to make a profit on money.
The banks were created in the purpose of to fill numerous functions as to manage means of payment, to assure the security financial transactions, grant a credit, and the bank serve as intermediary on financial markets
In France everybody is free to create an bank if the conditions are respected.
The bank has a particular status provided in the Monetary and financial Code which fix the conditions to be able to establish a bank.
It is necessary humans means that is to say at the very least two person resident in France without judicial history and with skills as regards financial and legal.
Shareholders can come complete human capital in investing to get actions within the bank.
Then share capital changes according to the category of the credit institution but it stays ever high.For example it is necessary to have 5 millions euros to set up a mutualist bank.
The banking activity as a commercial by nature must be exercised in commercial society form
Once the thorough conditions is set, the new institution must get approval of the Authority of Prudential control and Resolution
For to grant the approval the Authority of Prudential control and Resolution take into account notably :
-The program of activity of the company applicant
-technical and financial means that the company to planning of to implement
-The quality of the providers of capital
-The capacity of the company at to realize its objectives of development
After to have succeed at to create a bank it is necessary to know how to manage it to make a profit and avoid the fall (krash). Nowadays the new majority of banks are online bankings.
For to develop a bank it is necessary first of all to constitute an important customer composed either private individual or professional coming to deposit their money at the bank.
To attract of numerous customers it's important to have the interest rate more interesting than the others banks it is what we call the report to the competition. A bank can differ by setting up a effective strategy as for example to use the financial innovation
The communication strategy of a bank is important to attract customers. Especially since a few years the banking sector knew numerous scandals so the customers are more suspicious. The bank must meet the new expectations of its customers
There are mainly three type of banks, banks controlled by the state or national bank, private bank only for prestigious customers, and of course commercial banks for local economy and classic customers
The main difficulty in a good developing, is strict and many controls. They are practised by acpr, who to see to after a good application of a monetary and financial code.
The controls are exercised on the situation of the managers of banks, banking analysis to prevent of risk, The respect for the requirements of solvency, on the financial situation of banks
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-10-2013 06:59
Réponse: Correction / syntaxe de gerondif, postée le 01-10-2013 à 18:09:17 (S | E)
Bonjour,
vous avez dû faire cette traduction soit au traducteur automatique, soit mot-à-mot parce que on voit bien la trame française et l'ordre ou le choix des mots:
les trois premiers mots, "I am explain" "je suis explique", vont vous faire du mal.
traduction littérale ou mot-à-mot pour: "il faut des moyens humains": "It is necessary humans means"
idem pour "un développement plus tardif" "a development more later"
"Après avoir réussi à créer une banque": "After to have succeed at to create a bank" .
je comprends bien que vous faites plus de droit que d'anglais mais il y a beaucoup de choses à corriger ou à changer complètement. Si je mets en bleu ce qui est faux:
(corrections en vert)
I am explain to you how to establish a bank in France.
The banking activities in France knew a development more later and more difficult than in the nearby countries as Italy or the Netherlands.
The first important banks emerged to the nineteenth century with the Credit Lyonnais and the Société Générale. During this period the majority of banks was(pluriel + mauvais temps) going to be established by strangers and jews because of the fact that in the christian morality it was forbidden to make a profit on money.
The banks were created in the purpose of to fill numerous functions as to manage means of payment, to assure the security of financial transactions, grant a credit, and the bank serve(le s) as intermediary on financial markets
In France everybody is free to create an bank if the conditions are respected.
The bank has a particular status provided in the Monetary and financial Code which fix(3ème personne) the conditions to be able to establish a bank.
It is necessary humans means that is to say at the very least two person(pluriel) resident in France without judicial history(history, c'est l'histoire enseignée, pas les ennuis judiciaires, le casier) and with skills as regards financial and legal***(adjectifs esseulés).
Shareholders can come *** complete human capital in(moyen = by) investing to get actions within the bank.
Then share capital changes according to the category of the credit institution but it stays ever high.For example it is necessary to have 5 millions euros to set up a mutualist bank.
The banking activity as a commercial (sens?)by nature must be exercised in commercial society form
Once the thorough (sens?) conditions is(pluriel) set, the new institution must get the approval of the Authority of Prudential control and Resolution
For to grant the approval the Authority of Prudential control and Resolution must take into account notably :
-The program of activity of the company applicant
-technical and financial means that the company to planning of to implement
-The quality of the providers of capital
-The capacity of the company at to realize its objectives of development
After to have succeed at to create a bank it is necessary to know how to manage it to make a profit and avoid the fall (krash). Nowadays the new majority of banks are online bankings.
For to develop a bank it is necessary first of all to constitute an important customer(une importante clientèle?) composed either of private individual or of professionals coming to deposit their money at the bank.
To attract of numerous (de nombreux traduit mot-à-mot) customers it's important to have the interest rate more interesting than the others banks it is what we call the report to the competition. A bank can differ by setting up a effective strategy as for example to use the financial innovation
The communication strategy of a bank is important to attract customers. Especially since a few years the banking sector knew numerous scandals so the customers are more suspicious. The bank must meet the new expectations of its customers
There are mainly three type of banks, banks controlled by the state or national banks, private banks only for prestigious customers, and of course commercial banks for local economy and classic customers
The main difficulty in a good developing, is strict and many controls. They are practised by acpr, who to see to after a good application of a monetary and financial code.
The controls are exercised on the situation of the managers of the banks, banking analysis to prevent of risk, The respect for the requirements of solvency, on the financial situation of banks
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