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Message de marquet94 posté le 09-09-2013 à 16:16:59 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Auriez-vous la gentillesse d'apporter les corrections nécessaires à cette lettre de motivation:
I am looking for a full-time position in xx, in the xxx sector. Attracted by helping organizations to improve their performance, primarily through the analysis of existing organizational problems and development of plans for improvement, I am very interested in joining the Strategy department of leading companies in this sector.
Throughout my career I have worked extensively in the accounting and finance field. During your review of my resume, you may also note that I gave assistance to businesses experiencing the changes that the dynamic global economy brings about.
I am proud of having worked in different contexts of practice. I assisted employee consultative committees, I worked with managing directors, investors and shareholders to find solutions of restructuring, I put all my energy to preparation of financial reports, budgets and of follow cash flow.
My positive attitude and self motivation always make me successful. I am confident that my hard work and integrity combined with my skills and my willingness to take initiatives will prove useful to your team.
I grew up and work in xx, but I admire so many things about American way of work: the emphasis on presentation, communication skills, professionalism. Most importantly, I love the optimism and drive to succeed in each project. There is much energy and its seems contagious. This frame of work inspires me to follow my dreams.
I will be available for further information at any suitable time, and would look forward to an opportunity to discuss in person how my background and experience could contribute to your organisation requirements.
En vous remerciant par avance,
Cordialement,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-09-2013 17:28
Message de marquet94 posté le 09-09-2013 à 16:16:59 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Auriez-vous la gentillesse d'apporter les corrections nécessaires à cette lettre de motivation:
I am looking for a full-time position in xx, in the xxx sector. Attracted by helping organizations to improve their performance, primarily through the analysis of existing organizational problems and development of plans for improvement, I am very interested in joining the Strategy department of leading companies in this sector.
Throughout my career I have worked extensively in the accounting and finance field. During your review of my resume, you may also note that I gave assistance to businesses experiencing the changes that the dynamic global economy brings about.
I am proud of having worked in different contexts of practice. I assisted employee consultative committees, I worked with managing directors, investors and shareholders to find solutions of restructuring, I put all my energy to preparation of financial reports, budgets and of follow cash flow.
My positive attitude and self motivation always make me successful. I am confident that my hard work and integrity combined with my skills and my willingness to take initiatives will prove useful to your team.
I grew up and work in xx, but I admire so many things about American way of work: the emphasis on presentation, communication skills, professionalism. Most importantly, I love the optimism and drive to succeed in each project. There is much energy and its seems contagious. This frame of work inspires me to follow my dreams.
I will be available for further information at any suitable time, and would look forward to an opportunity to discuss in person how my background and experience could contribute to your organisation requirements.
En vous remerciant par avance,
Cordialement,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-09-2013 17:28
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