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Message de sara4 posté le 22-05-2013 à 11:17:02 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
demain je passe mon oral d'anglais et je souhaiterais que quelqu'un puisse me corriger s'il vous plaît..
Je vous poste ma 1ere partie :
I’m going to talk about the notion of progress. First of all, I would like to give a quick definition of that notion. The idea of progress means the action to advance, to involve, etc... This notion is a modern idea who opposed stabilities of past. Take the study case of India. What could explain India is a country on the move?
For me not totally because he meet some problems Nevertheless he committed to develop some areas such as the car, with “the new people’s car”, the car’s name is TATA NONO, it’s a small car for the middle social class but this project didn’t work because the population lift up a big rate of poverty! Besides talking about the poverty, resources of water are very are soft! In fact in my history class (because I study the progress of different country) I saw the number of people in India can’t drink water is very important, it’s amazing, they drink more coca than water…
(la 2deuxième partie concernant les microcredit est en cours de préparation)
Je vous remercie!
Cordialement Sarah
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-05-2013 11:55
Message de sara4 posté le 22-05-2013 à 11:17:02 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
demain je passe mon oral d'anglais et je souhaiterais que quelqu'un puisse me corriger s'il vous plaît..
Je vous poste ma 1ere partie :
I’m going to talk about the notion of progress. First of all, I would like to give a quick definition of that notion. The idea of progress means the action to advance, to involve, etc... This notion is a modern idea who opposed stabilities of past. Take the study case of India. What could explain India is a country on the move?
For me not totally because he meet some problems Nevertheless he committed to develop some areas such as the car, with “the new people’s car”, the car’s name is TATA NONO, it’s a small car for the middle social class but this project didn’t work because the population lift up a big rate of poverty! Besides talking about the poverty, resources of water are very are soft! In fact in my history class (because I study the progress of different country) I saw the number of people in India can’t drink water is very important, it’s amazing, they drink more coca than water…
(la 2deuxième partie concernant les microcredit est en cours de préparation)
Je vous remercie!
Cordialement Sarah
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-05-2013 11:55
Réponse: Aide/ Progress de sara4, postée le 22-05-2013 à 12:12:19 (S | E)
Merci Lucile!
Suis-je dans la bonne voie ou ?
Réponse: Aide/ Progress de sherry48, postée le 22-05-2013 à 13:10:17 (S | E)
Hello. Here are some things to look at again.
I’m going to talk about the notion of progress. First of all, I would like to give a quick definition of that notion. The idea of progress means the action to advance to involve, , etc... This notion is a modern idea who
opposed stabilities of past. Take the study case of India. What could explain India is a country on the move? For me not totally because he
meet some problems Nevertheless he committed to develop some areas such as the car, with “the new people’s car”, the car’s name is TATA NONO, it’s a small car for the middle social class but this project didn’t work because the population lift up a big rate of poverty! Besides talking about the poverty, resources of water are very are soft (look up the word again and find a different synonym)! In fact in my history class (because I study the progress of different country)(plural) I saw the number of people in India __ can’t drink water is very important(synonym), it’s amazing, they drink more coca than water…Sherry
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