Correction/be yourself
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Message de shady1208 posté le 10-04-2013 à 21:48:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous
j'aurais besoin de votre aide afin de corriger un traité de réflexion sur le sujet : Is it more imporant to be your real self in life or to conform to the right social image.
Mon devoir n'a pas encore d'introduction et de conclusion, pour le moment j'ai mes deux parties:
"After much thought, i think it is more importente to be real self. So we know that our friends like us for what we are really and no for the role we play for conformed to the society. May to be only with our personality. We are different, may be well in the job and the relation social.
On second thoughts, i think it is necessary somthing, to conform to society. It is difficult for some people? This may prevent us some job and reject some peaple."
Merci pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-04-2013 21:54
Message de shady1208 posté le 10-04-2013 à 21:48:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous
j'aurais besoin de votre aide afin de corriger un traité de réflexion sur le sujet : Is it more imporant to be your real self in life or to conform to the right social image.
Mon devoir n'a pas encore d'introduction et de conclusion, pour le moment j'ai mes deux parties:
"After much thought, i think it is more importente to be real self. So we know that our friends like us for what we are really and no for the role we play for conformed to the society. May to be only with our personality. We are different, may be well in the job and the relation social.
On second thoughts, i think it is necessary somthing, to conform to society. It is difficult for some people? This may prevent us some job and reject some peaple."
Merci pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-04-2013 21:54
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