Lettre motivation / européen
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Message de baabybel posté le 27-03-2013 à 16:56:17 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je souhaite rentrer en anglais européen l'année prochaine et pour ce faire, je dois rédiger une lettre de motivation (en anglais bien sûr :D) pourriez-vous me la corriger ou même me donner des conseils ?
Dear Sir,
I’m xxx and i’m fourteen . I’m actually in year ten at xxx school, in european section and I would like to continue my way to become bilinguage and do my studies in an english country.
I’m serious ans conscientious, helpful, curious, dynamic, motivated, enthusiastic, organized and talkative.
I enjoy speak english, write english, listen to english, learn new words, watch english videos and go to Great Britain.
I’ve been studying english for eight years and I’ve been developping a serious insterest for this language
I’ve already been to London twice, including one week in an english host family.
Join the european section would help me to ameliorate my english and the practise about abroad language seems to me essential for the profesional life ; indeed, i’ts right that English is spoken everywhere in the world.
Your faithfully.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-03-2013 18:35
Message de baabybel posté le 27-03-2013 à 16:56:17 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je souhaite rentrer en anglais européen l'année prochaine et pour ce faire, je dois rédiger une lettre de motivation (en anglais bien sûr :D) pourriez-vous me la corriger ou même me donner des conseils ?
Dear Sir,
I’m xxx and i’m fourteen . I’m actually in year ten at xxx school, in european section and I would like to continue my way to become bilinguage and do my studies in an english country.
I’m serious ans conscientious, helpful, curious, dynamic, motivated, enthusiastic, organized and talkative.
I enjoy speak english, write english, listen to english, learn new words, watch english videos and go to Great Britain.
I’ve been studying english for eight years and I’ve been developping a serious insterest for this language
I’ve already been to London twice, including one week in an english host family.
Join the european section would help me to ameliorate my english and the practise about abroad language seems to me essential for the profesional life ; indeed, i’ts right that English is spoken everywhere in the world.
Your faithfully.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-03-2013 18:35
Réponse: Lettre motivation / européen de notrepere, postée le 28-03-2013 à 05:23:16 (S | E)
HelloQuelques mots ont besoin de majuscules. Are you related to e e cummings?
Quelques fautes de temps.
I enjoy + verb+ing
Il reste d'autres fautes. Il faut corriger celles ci-dessus.
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