Phrases /correction

Phrases /correction
Message de aurelia25 posté le 24-03-2013 à 11:32:15 (S | E | F)
Bonjour

pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ces phrases s'il vous plait ?
Merci pour tout.

They needed slaves in their fields.
If a slave could read and write,he could led a revolt against his master.
If they were educated,they would access to knowledge.
They thought knowledge was the power.
Without slaves the masters would lose money ( ils perdraient de l'argent?)

Merci encore.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-03-2013 12:03

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Réponse: Phrases /correction de jonquille, postée le 24-03-2013 à 17:00:09 (S | E)
Hello! There are a few small corrections to be made, but most of the text is correct. Good work!

They needed slaves in their fields. OK
If a slave could read and write, he could led(verb tense) a revolt against his master.
If they were educated,they would____ (missing verb) access to knowledge.
They thought knowledge was the power.
Without slaves, the masters would lose money. (ils perdraient de l'argent?)

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Réponse: Phrases /correction de aurelia25, postée le 24-03-2013 à 18:23:08 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup jonquille:

donc j'ai remplacé led par lead.
Ensuite j'ai enlevé le the devant power et pour finir j'ai mis "would have access " ?

Est-ce mieux .

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Réponse: Phrases /correction de gerondif, postée le 24-03-2013 à 18:34:51 (S | E)
Hello,
oui, ce sont les corrections qui étaient attendues.

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