Lettre motivation /assistanat
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Message de liloo97 posté le 18-12-2012 à 06:36:43 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je postule pour un programme d'assistanat au Royaume Uni.
Voici ma lettre de motivation, pourriez- vous me corriger s'il vous plait?
Merci pour vos réponses.
December, 17, 2012
Dear sir or madam.
My name is xxxx. I am graduated from the University of the xxxx with a master degree in foreign language. I am currently preparing the CAPES exam (Postgraduate Teaching Certificate) in order to become an English teacher.
I love English language and culture and working as a French assistant would allow me to immerse myself in the British culture.
Then, this experience would help me to improve my English. It would be possible for me to share my interests with British students and at the same time to improve their knowledges of French language and culture.
Moreover, I have had the opportunity to do an internship in a secondary school during my studies and working as a French assistant will be an asset in my training as a teacher. I am curious, patient, serious and motivated and I think that all these qualities are required for this job. I am really determined to dedicate myself to it.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-12-2012 07:54
Message de liloo97 posté le 18-12-2012 à 06:36:43 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je postule pour un programme d'assistanat au Royaume Uni.
Voici ma lettre de motivation, pourriez- vous me corriger s'il vous plait?
Merci pour vos réponses.
December, 17, 2012
Dear sir or madam.
My name is xxxx. I am graduated from the University of the xxxx with a master degree in foreign language. I am currently preparing the CAPES exam (Postgraduate Teaching Certificate) in order to become an English teacher.
I love English language and culture and working as a French assistant would allow me to immerse myself in the British culture.
Then, this experience would help me to improve my English. It would be possible for me to share my interests with British students and at the same time to improve their knowledges of French language and culture.
Moreover, I have had the opportunity to do an internship in a secondary school during my studies and working as a French assistant will be an asset in my training as a teacher. I am curious, patient, serious and motivated and I think that all these qualities are required for this job. I am really determined to dedicate myself to it.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-12-2012 07:54
Réponse: Lettre motivation /assistanat de bluestar, postée le 18-12-2012 à 19:49:17 (S | E)
Bonjour...
Dear sir or madam.
(Majuscules: Sir or Madam)My name is xxxx. I am graduated
("I am a graduate of...." or "I graduated from...") from the University of the xxxx with a Mmaster's Ddegree in foreign language(il faut le pluriel). I am currently preparing the CAPES exam (Postgraduate Teaching Certificate) in order to become an English teacher.I love English language and culture and working as a French assistant would allow me to immerse myself in the British culture.
Then, this experience would help me to improve my English. It would be possible for me to share my interests with British students and at the same time to improve their knowledges
(singulier) of French language and culture.Moreover, I have had the opportunity to do an internship in a secondary school during my studies and working as a French assistant will
(temps: par souci de cohérence, continuer à utiliser le conditionnel) be an asset in my training as a teacher. I am curious, patient, serious and motivated and I think that all these qualities are required for this job. I am really determined to dedicate myself to it. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely.
Réponse: Lettre motivation /assistanat de liloo97, postée le 18-12-2012 à 22:27:47 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Je vous remercie pour vos corrections.
Réponse: Lettre motivation /assistanat de violet91, postée le 19-12-2012 à 14:52:31 (S | E)
Hello , liloo...how lucky you are to intend to work as a French assistant ! I do hope you'll be selected for it ; You will never be through such an exciting year , I bet !
- I'll suggest you add ' I'll improve and polish my English, making it almost as fluent as a native speaker's.( Tu es supposée le maîtriser déjà ) ....in the same time ..
Good luck and merry Christmas ! Bonne chance aussi , bien sûr, pour ton prochain Capes !
Réponse: Lettre motivation /assistanat de liloo97, postée le 21-12-2012 à 17:00:26 (S | E)
Hello violet,
Thanks for your advice.
yes you're right, I do hope that it will be a great experience and that I'll polish my English!
Merry Christmas!
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