Correction/texte au passé

Correction/texte au passé
Message de sable27 posté le 07-11-2012 à 15:31:56 (S | E | F)
Bonjour

Je suis en train de rédiger un texte qui raconte mes meilleures vacances et je voulais savoir si ce que j'écris est correct.
Pouvez-vous m'aider svp s'il vous plaît?
Merci d avance.

I went to Croatia for my holiday. It has been the most beautiful country I have ever seen !
I stayed only two weeks in this country but I could see a lot of different scenery.
I saw a lot of beautiful beach or city but my favorite place was the lakes Plitivice.
The lakes are situate in national park in the north of Croatia.
It is a the most famous place in Croatia and when I saw this I understood why.
The water was turquoise and clean and the place was very quiet and peaceful.
It was a very good trip and I will return in this country the next years.

Merci d avance pour votre aide et vos avis

Désolé pour les accents, j'écris en QWERTY.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-11-2012 17:04

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Réponse: Correction/texte au passé de notrepere, postée le 07-11-2012 à 17:31:50 (S | E)
Hello

I went to Croatia for my holiday. It has been (temps) the most beautiful country I have ever seen !
I stayed only (mal placé - I only stayed) two weeks in this country but I could see (temps) a lot of different scenery.
I saw a lot of beautiful beach (a lot of + nom au pluriel) or city (idem) but my favorite place was the lakes Plitivice (ordre).
The lakes are situate[ ] in [ ]national park in the north of Croatia.
It is a the most famous place in Croatia and when I saw this I understood why.
The water was turquoise and clean and the place was very quiet and peaceful.
It was a very good trip and I will return in(mauvaise préposition) this country the next years (mal dit).

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Réponse: Correction/texte au passé de sable27, postée le 07-11-2012 à 18:27:48 (S | E)
Tout d'abord merci pour ta réponse.J'ai fait quelques corrections suite à tes remarques. Peux-tu me dire si c'est ok, merci!

I went to Croatia for my holiday. It's the most beautiful country I have ever seen !
I only stayed two weeks in this country but I saw different scenery
Like a beautiful beachs or cities but my favorite place was the Plitivice lake.
The lakes are situate in the national park in the north of Croatia.
It is a the most famous place in Croatia and when I saw this I understood why.
The water was turquoise and clean and the place was very quiet and peaceful.
It was a very good trip and I will return on this country.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-11-2012 19:09

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Réponse: Correction/texte au passé de sable27, postée le 07-11-2012 à 18:30:15 (S | E)
J'ai oublié: it is the most; pas it is a the most

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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-11-2012 19:10

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Réponse: Correction/texte au passé de sable27, postée le 07-11-2012 à 20:27:51 (S | E)
Is it good now? Thanks.

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Réponse: Correction/texte au passé de sherry48, postée le 08-11-2012 à 01:54:24 (S | E)
Hello.
There are just a few more things.
I went to Croatia for my holiday. It's the most beautiful country I have ever seen!
I only stayed two weeks in this country but I saw different scenery (Is it 1 sentence or 2?)
Like a beautiful beachs or cities but my favorite place was (the) Plitivice lake.
The lakes are situate in the national park in the north of Croatia.
It is a the most famous place in Croatia and when I saw this I understood why.
The water was turquoise and clean and the place was very quiet and peaceful.
It was a very good trip and I will return on this country.

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