Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème

Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème
Message de lucile83 posté le 07-09-2012 à 08:27:01 (S | E | F)
Hello

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Correction vers le 15 septembre
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Kevin de retour à l’école
Mardi c’était le jour de la rentrée, et Kevin a dû se lever tôt. Cela n’a pas été un problème car il aime beaucoup l’école et il savait qu’il allait retrouver tous ses copains. Il a changé de maîtresse comme prévu et il trouve qu’elle est très gentille. Il a revu tous ses copains, il a déjeuné avec eux à la cantine, sa journée s’est bien passée et il était très heureux.
Demain il fête son anniversaire avec une douzaine de copains chez lui. En réalité il a déjà fêté son anniversaire avec sa famille au mois d’août mais ses copains étaient en vacances. Maintenant il va le fêter à nouveau chez lui et ils vont passer un merveilleux après-midi tous ensemble. Ils vont se déguiser, jouer, voir un petit spectacle de clown, écouter des histoires, et déguster un succulent goûter organisé par toutes les mamans. Ce sera un anniversaire dont il se souviendra longtemps.

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de sebastien450, postée le 07-09-2012 à 10:16:32 (S | E)
Merci !!

Kevin come back at school,
Thursday was the day of start school, and Kevin must woke up early. That wasn't a matter because he likes very much the school and he knew he found some friends. He changed teacher as scheduled and he happens she is very nice, He saw all friendly again, he lunched with them in the canteen, his day was fine and he was very happy.
Tomorrow, he will celebrate his birthday with dozen of friends at home. Really he had been celebrated his birthday with him family on August but these friends were in holidays. Now he will celebrate it in new in your home and they will have a marvellous afternoon together. He will has dressing up, will has playing, looking a little circus show, listenning some stories and savour a great meal oganized by all muns. Will be a birthday so he will remenber for a long time.

Je débute...

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de paquita, postée le 07-09-2012 à 10:43:02 (S | E)
Je débute aussi...

Kevin back at school
Tuesday was the first schoolday and Kevin had to get up early. He did not mind because he loves going to school and he knew he would meet all his friends. He has got a new teacher as expected and he thinks she is very nice. He met all his schoolmates, he had lunch with them in the schoolrestaurant, he spent a good day and he was very happy.
Tomorrow he is celebrating his birthday with a dozen friends. Actually, he already celebrated his birthday with all his family in August but his friends were on holiday. Now he's going to celebrate it again at home and they will spend a wonderful afternoon all together. They will be disguising, playing, seeing a little clown show, listening to stories, and savouring a delicious snack cooked by all the mothers. It will be a birthday he will remember for a long time

Merci pour cet entrainement et ce test...et surtout les corrections judicieuses...

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de maya92, postée le 07-09-2012 à 10:45:37 (S | E)
Hello Lucile,

Kevin is back to school

Tuesday was the start of the new school year and Kevin had to get up early. This was not a problem because he likes very much going to school and he knew he was going to meet up with all his mates. As planned, he had a new teacher and thinks she is very nice. He met all his friends and had a school meal with them. He had a nice day and was very happy. Tomorrow he celebrates his birthday with a dozen pals at his place. Actually, he already celebrated his birthday last August with his family but his mates were on holidays. Now he is going to celebrate again at home and they will have a fantastic afternoon all together. They will dress up, play, have a little clown show, listen to some stories and enjoy a delicious snack prepared by all the mothers.
That will be a birthday hard to forget.

I reckon they will have a good night sleep after all that..thank you Lucile, see you..

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de snowy-winter, postée le 07-09-2012 à 14:41:04 (S | E)
Hello lucile,

Kevin in coming back to the school
Tuesday was thefirst schoolday and Kevin had to get up early.this does not have a problem because he likes school so much and he knew that he would find all his buddies. He changes mistress as planned and she is very nice. He has seen all his friendsl he had lunch with them at the canteen.the day went well and he was very happy. Tomorrow he celebrates his birthday with a  dozen friends with him.in reality he has already celebrated its bbirthday with her family in August but his friends were on vacation.Now he will celebrate a new home and they will go after a wonderful afternoon together. they will desguise; play; see a little clown show;listen to stories and taste a succulent taste organised by all mothers. It will be a birthday that he will not soon forget.

Thank you.

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de mamou3, postée le 07-09-2012 à 21:12:06 (S | E)
Hello Lucile

Kevin comes back to school
Tuesday, it was the first day of school and Kevin had to get up early. It wasn't a problem because he likes school very much and he knew he was going to find all of his friends. His teacher had changed according to the plan and he likes her very kind. He met all of his friends again, he had a lunch with them in the canteen; his day took place good and he was very happy.
Tomorrow, he'll celebrate his birthday with a dozen of friends at home. In reality he already celebrated his birthday with his family in August but his friends were on holidays. Now, he is going to celebrate it again at home and they are going to have a marvellous afternoon together. They will dress up, play, watch a little clown's show, listen to some stories ans taste a delicious afternoon snack homemade by all the mothers. It will be a birthday which he will remember for a long time.

Thank you for this exercise and nice to meet young Kevin again !

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de marilor76, postée le 09-09-2012 à 00:29:15 (S | E)
Hello ! Here is my try :

Kevin goes back to school
Tuesday was the beginning of the new school year and Kevin had to get up early. It doesn't matter because he loves school a lot and he knew he would meet his friends again. As planned, his teacher had changed and he thinks she is very nice. He saw all his friends again, had school lunch with them, so the day went off well and he was very happy.
Tomorrow he is going to celebrate his birthday with a dozen friends at home. In reality, he already had good time for his birthday party in August with his family but his friends were on holidays. Now, he is having good time again for his birthday at home and they will all together spend a wonderful afternoon. Tomorrow, they are dressing up, playing, seeing a clown show, listening to stories and tasting a succulent snack organized by all the mums. It will be a famous birthday party that he will remember for a long time.

Thank you for this good exercise

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de lemagemasque, postée le 09-09-2012 à 18:49:50 (S | E)
Hello,

Here is my try:
Return to school for Kevin
Last Tuesday Kevin came back to school and he had to get up early. That was not a problem because he enjoys school and he knew he would see his friends again. He has changed teacher as expected and he thinks she is very kind. He saw all his friends, he had lunch with them in the canteen, everything went well and he was very glad.
Tomorrow he will have his birthday party with a dozen friends in his place. In fact he had already his birthday party with his family in August but his friends were on holiday. He will have it once again at his home and they will have a wonderful afternoon all together. They will be disguised, play, see a little show of clowns, listen to stories and savour a delicious snack organised by all the mums. It will be a birthday which he will remember for a long time.

Thank you!
Goodbye!

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de irish21, postée le 10-09-2012 à 02:31:46 (S | E)
Hello lucile,
thank you for this exercise.
The interpretation of the sequence of tenses is always a sensitive point.

Kevin goes back to school.
Tuesday was the first day of school and Kevin had to get up early. This was not hard because he enjoys going to school very much and he was delighted to meet all his friends again. His teacher has been replaced by another teacher, as expected and he finds her to be very kind. He saw all his friends again and they had lunch together in the canteen. His day has been good and he was very happy.
He is celebrating his birthday at his place with a dozen of friends tomorrow. Actually, he has already celebrated his birthday in August with his family while his friends were going on holiday. So once again, he is going to celebrate it at his place and they will have a wonderful afternoon all together. They are going to dress up, play, see a little clown show, listen to stories and savour a delicious snack organised by all the moms.
This will be a birthday party he will remember for a long time.

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de plumet98, postée le 10-09-2012 à 05:03:21 (S | E)
Hello !!!

Kevin comme back at school
Thuesday was the day at school, and Kevin had to get up early That haven't been a problem he likes very much to school, he knew that he was going to find.He changed the teacher as was as and he find she very kind. He saw again all friends , he have lunch wich them at the canteen, his day passed well and he was very happy.
Tomorrow he celebrates his happy birthday wich one dozen friends at home.
In fact he has already to celebrate his happy birthdaywich his family on august but friends's were in hollidays.
Now he is going it celebrate at home to newthey are going to passe a excellent day after moon together.
They are going to disguise, play, see a little show of clown, listen stories and eat a delicious to taste organized alls mothers. It vill be a happy birthday who he will remember for a long time

Think you very much

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de grafi, postée le 10-09-2012 à 10:12:00 (S | E)
Hello,
Kevin's back to school.
Tuesday was the day of school and Kevin had to wake up early. It was not a problem because he likes school so much and he knew that he will find again all his friends. His teacher has changed as it was known and it seems that she's very nice. He met his friends, had lunch with them, so this first day was great and he was very happy.
Tomorrow, he's going to celebrate his birthday with a twelveth of friends at home. Truely, he has ever celebrated it with his family in August but friends were on holidays. So now, it will be a second party and they're going to enjoy a wonderful afternoon all together. They're going to dress up, playing, seeing a clown show, listenning stories and savoring a delicious cakes made by all mums.
It will be a birthday that he keeps a long memory.

Annabelle
Débutant
J'ai cherché dans le dictionnaire les verbes "se déguiser" et "savourer" que je ne connaissais pas.

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de matou94, postée le 10-09-2012 à 16:15:26 (S | E)
Hello Lucile,

Here is my translation

Kevin comes back to school

Tuesday, it was the first day of school, and Kevin had to get up early. It wasn't a problem because he likes school very much and he knew that he was going to meet all his friends. As expected, he changed teacher, and he thinks that she's very kind. He saw all his friends again and had school meals with them ; he had a good day and he was very happy.
Tomorrow, at home, he'll celebrate his birthday with a dozen friends. In fact he already celebrated his birthday with his family in August but his friends were on holidays. Now he's going to celebrate it again, and together they are going to spend a wonderful afternoon. They are going to disguise, play, see clown's small show, listen to stories, and taste a delicious snack organized by all the mums.
It will be a birthday which he will remember for a long time !

Thanks a lot Lucile.

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Merci Lucile.
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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de shodaboy, postée le 11-09-2012 à 18:38:06 (S | E)
Hello ,

here we go again

Kevin is back at school
Tuesday was the first day at school and Kevin had to get up early.It wasn't such a dilemma because he enjoys school a lot and he knew that he's going to have all his friend back.As it was meant to be,his mistress has changed and it turns out that she is very kind.He saw all his friends again, he had lunch with them at the canteen, his day went very fine and he was delighted.
Tomorrow he will throw his birthday party with a dozen of his friends coming at his place.To tell the truth, he already had a birthday party with his family in August but his friends were on vacation.Now it is time to celebrate once again at home and they are about to spend a delightful afternoon.They are planning to disguise, play et watch a little clown show, listen to tales and enjoy a tasteful snack set up by every mummies.It will be a long-remembered birthday

Thanks again for the exercise.

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de otmanechaafane, postée le 12-09-2012 à 14:14:35 (S | E)
Hello,

Kevin back to school
Tuesday was the first day of school, and Kevin had to get up early. This was not a problem because he loves the school and he knew he would find all his friends. He changed mistress as planned and he finds it is very nice. He has seen all his friends, he had lunch with them in the cafeteria, the day went well and he was very happy.
Tomorrow birthday with a dozen friends with him. In fact he has already celebrated her birthday with her family in August but his friends were on vacation. Now he will celebrate at home again and they will spend a wonderful afternoon together. They will dress up, play, see a little clown show, listen to stories, and enjoy a delicious snack organized by all mothers. It will be a birthday he will not soon forget

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de yohenu, postée le 13-09-2012 à 00:29:46 (S | E)
Hello!
Here is my try:

Kevin is back to school
Tuesday was the first day of school, and Kevin had to get up early. It wasn't a problem because he loves the school very much, and he knew he would find all his friends. He changed teacher as planned and he finds she is very kind. He has seen all his friends, he had lunch with them in the cafeteria, the day went well and he was very happy.
Tomorrow is his birthday party, he invited a lot of friends . Actually, he has already celebrated his birthday with his family in August but his friends were on holiday. Now he will celebrate it at home again and they will pass a wonderful afternoon together. They will dress up, play, see a little clown show, listen to stories, and enjoy a delicious snack organised by all mothers. It will be a birthday he will long remember.

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de littlemouse19, postée le 13-09-2012 à 20:59:25 (S | E)
Hello Lucile,

Here is my try :

Kevin's back to school
Tuesday was the first day of school and Kevin had to get up early. It wasn't a problem because he likes school very much and he knew he was going to meet back all his classmates. As was expected, his teacher has changed and he finds she's very kind. He met back all his friends, he breakfasted with them in the canteen. His day happened very well and he is very happy.
Tomorrow he will celebrate his birthday with a dozen of friends of him at home. Actually, he has already celebrated his birthday with his family. It was in August but at the time, his friends had gone on holiday. Now he's going to celebrate this event again at home and they will spend a wonderful afternoon all together. They will dress up, watch a small clowns show, listen to fairytales and they will taste a delicious afternoon tea that all their mothers will have organized. It's going to be a birthday he will never forget!

Thanks for this exercise !

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de lucile83, postée le 15-09-2012 à 23:13:25 (S | E)
Hello

Thank you for your work. Congratulations to each of you. It was great to give you advice and hints and read your corrections.
Here is my translation. You can ask me of course if you have any question.
See you later

Kevin returns to school
Last Tuesday was the first day of the school year and Kevin had to get up early. This was not a problem because he really likes school and he knew he would see his friends again. As planned he had a change of teachers and he thinks she is very nice. He saw all his friends again, he had lunch with them at the school restaurant. He had a great day and was very happy.
Tomorrow he is celebrating his birthday at home with a dozen friends. Actually, he already celebrated his birthday with his family in August, but his friends were away on holiday. Now he is going to celebrate it again in his house and they are going to have a great afternoon all together. They are going to dress up, play, watch a little clown performance, listen to a few stories, and enjoy gorgeous snacks prepared by all of the mothers. He will remember this birthday for a long time.

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de irish21, postée le 16-09-2012 à 00:17:53 (S | E)
Hello lucile,

Thank you very much. It seems so easy and evident... when we read your translation

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de plumet98, postée le 16-09-2012 à 03:20:12 (S | E)
merci beaucoup

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de mamou3, postée le 16-09-2012 à 07:16:54 (S | E)
Hello Lucie,
and for this correction we can learn a lot with it !

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de davhy46, postée le 16-09-2012 à 09:04:20 (S | E)
SLT Bonjour,
c'est trop cool ton sujet; j aime
t'es la meilleure!

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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-09-2012 09:36
quel enthousiasme!

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de abc12, postée le 16-09-2012 à 18:18:41 (S | E)
Hello,
It's the first time I answer a subject.

Tuesday was the first schoolday and Kevin had to get up early. That has not been a problem, because he likes school very much, and he new that he was going to meet up with all his mates.
He has changed mistress and thinks she is very nice. He has seen his buddies, he had school meals with them. His day was happened so good, and he was very happy.
Tomorrow, he is celebrating his birthday at home with a dozen of friends. In true he already
had his birthday'sparty with his family in August but his friends were on holiday. Now he is going to have party again at home and they are going to spend a great afternoon all togerther.
They are going to disguise, to play, to see a little clown'show, to listen to stories,to
savour an afterschool organised by all mothers. It will be a birthday that he will remember for a long time.

Merci !

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Réponse: Kevin de retour à l'école/Thème de lemagemasque, postée le 16-09-2012 à 18:32:30 (S | E)
Hello,

Merci pour cette traduction !

Bonne soirée !

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