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Message de dominus01 posté le 28-08-2012 à 12:34:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour ,
j'aimerais s'il vous plaît avoir un avis sur l'expression écrite que j'ai faite pour préparer mon examen d'anglais. En moyenne elle doit contenir 150 mots et le sujet est des vacances de rêves.
Merci pour vos réponses.
I love traveling in hot countries but I hate cold countries.
I went to Ibiza in Spain and to France.But one of my dreams is to go to Hawaii with my girlfriend.It's a real paradize with white sandy beach and palm trees and we don't worry about anything there.We can sit on the beach sipping a cocktail, make scuba diving, water skiing, meet people...In the evening we can go out with our new friends and see a Hawaiian dance or participate to a disco on a boat.
During the travel I hope to taste the local cuisine it would be delicious.I have to say that these holiday are very expensive so i have to keep my money to go there before being old.In my dreams I'll go in a beautiful hotel.I hope my dream will come true.Especially after long years of studying and very long examination sessions.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-08-2012 13:40
Message de dominus01 posté le 28-08-2012 à 12:34:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour ,
j'aimerais s'il vous plaît avoir un avis sur l'expression écrite que j'ai faite pour préparer mon examen d'anglais. En moyenne elle doit contenir 150 mots et le sujet est des vacances de rêves.
Merci pour vos réponses.
I love traveling in hot countries but I hate cold countries.
I went to Ibiza in Spain and to France.But one of my dreams is to go to Hawaii with my girlfriend.It's a real paradize with white sandy beach and palm trees and we don't worry about anything there.We can sit on the beach sipping a cocktail, make scuba diving, water skiing, meet people...In the evening we can go out with our new friends and see a Hawaiian dance or participate to a disco on a boat.
During the travel I hope to taste the local cuisine it would be delicious.I have to say that these holiday are very expensive so i have to keep my money to go there before being old.In my dreams I'll go in a beautiful hotel.I hope my dream will come true.Especially after long years of studying and very long examination sessions.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-08-2012 13:40
Réponse: Expression écrite/vacances de notrepere, postée le 29-08-2012 à 03:48:23 (S | E)
BonjourHere are some things to revise.
I love traveling in hot countries but I hate cold countries.
I went
(pas le bon temps) to Ibiza in Spain and to France. But one of my dreams is to go to Hawaii with my girlfriend. It's a real paradize with white sandy beach(pluriel) and palm trees and we don't worry about anything there. We can sit on the beach sipping a cocktail, make scuba diving, water skiing, meet people...In the evening we can go out with our new friends and see a Hawaiian dance or participate to a disco on a boat.During the travel
I hope to taste the local cuisine it would be delicious.(cette phrase n'a aucun sens.) I have to say that these holiday are very expensive so i have to keep my money to go there before being old.In my dreams I'll go in a beautiful hotel. I hope my dream will come true. Especially after long years of studying and very long examination sessions.Réponse: Expression écrite/vacances de lucile83, postée le 29-08-2012 à 07:40:34 (S | E)
Hello,
Un détail:
si c'est un examen d'anglais écrit attention à ce mot
traveling
vous devez appliquer l'orthographe britannique.
Réponse: Expression écrite/vacances de willy, postée le 29-08-2012 à 07:48:18 (S | E)
Hello!
Deux autres remarques :
- these holiday are ...
- true. Especially ... : ",", pas ".".
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