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Lettre motivation/relecture
Message de samm89 posté le 12-06-2012 à 03:08:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Je viens de rédiger une lettre de motivation pour un master en anglais, et j'aurais besoin que quelqu'un le relise à la recherche d'erreurs. Je n'ai personne dans mon entourage capable de faire cela, donc je compte sur vous
.
Merci beaucoup !
I hereby apply for entrance to the Master Program of Fluid Mechanics at the Ecole Polytechnique and the Pierre and Marie Curie University.
My studies at the Ecole Normale Supérieur de Cachan have led me to discover many branches of Mechanics, and the field of Fluid Dynamics appears to me as a particularly enthralling one. Indeed, it is a highly active field of research where I see the opportunity to work on really innovative subjects.
In the framework of my professional project, which consists to build an international career in this particular field, this program appears as the perfect preparation. Studying in such an eminent university will be a unique chance for me to specialize in this area and to be able to reach my ambitions.
I think I have all the skills required in order to attend to this program. Indeed, during the three years I have spent at the Department of Mechanichal Engineering of the Ecole Normale Supérieur de Cachan, I have acquired a bachelor’s and a master’s degree. Thus, I have a very strong background in Mechanics and solid knowledges of Fluid Mechanics. Moreover, thanks to a four-month internship in the United States of America, I am able to communicate effectively in an english-speaking environment.
Enclosed is my curriculum vitae and contact information for my references.
Please let me know if there are any other materials or information that will assist you in processing my application. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-06-2012 08:02
Message de samm89 posté le 12-06-2012 à 03:08:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Je viens de rédiger une lettre de motivation pour un master en anglais, et j'aurais besoin que quelqu'un le relise à la recherche d'erreurs. Je n'ai personne dans mon entourage capable de faire cela, donc je compte sur vous
. Merci beaucoup !
I hereby apply for entrance to the Master Program of Fluid Mechanics at the Ecole Polytechnique and the Pierre and Marie Curie University.
My studies at the Ecole Normale Supérieur de Cachan have led me to discover many branches of Mechanics, and the field of Fluid Dynamics appears to me as a particularly enthralling one. Indeed, it is a highly active field of research where I see the opportunity to work on really innovative subjects.
In the framework of my professional project, which consists to build an international career in this particular field, this program appears as the perfect preparation. Studying in such an eminent university will be a unique chance for me to specialize in this area and to be able to reach my ambitions.
I think I have all the skills required in order to attend to this program. Indeed, during the three years I have spent at the Department of Mechanichal Engineering of the Ecole Normale Supérieur de Cachan, I have acquired a bachelor’s and a master’s degree. Thus, I have a very strong background in Mechanics and solid knowledges of Fluid Mechanics. Moreover, thanks to a four-month internship in the United States of America, I am able to communicate effectively in an english-speaking environment.
Enclosed is my curriculum vitae and contact information for my references.
Please let me know if there are any other materials or information that will assist you in processing my application. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-06-2012 08:02
Réponse: Lettre motivation/relecture de notrepere, postée le 12-06-2012 à 04:05:44 (S | E)
HelloI hereby
(mot trop fort ; ce n'est pas une déclaration !) apply for entrance to the Fluid Mechanics Masters Program My studies at the Ecole Normale Supérieur de Cachan have led (je préfère : have allowed me to ou have given me the opportunity to) me to discover many branches of Mechanics (minuscule), and the field of Fluid Dynamics appears to me as a particularly enthralling one. Indeed, it is a highly active field of research where I see the opportunity to work on really innovative
In the framework of my professional project
, which consists I think I have all the skills required in order to
Enclosed is my curriculum vitae and contact information for my references.
Please let me know if there are any other materials or information that will assist you in processing my application. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
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Modifié par notrepere le 12-06-2012 07:07
Réponse: Lettre motivation/relecture de samm89, postée le 13-06-2012 à 03:10:15 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup pour cette réponse très rapide. Je vais envoyer tout ça.
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