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Correction lettre de motivation anglais
Message de aligeois posté le 03-06-2012 à 16:56:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, je dois faire une lettre de motivation pour intégrer la seconde européenne l'année prochaine et pour rendre mieux, je l'ai faite en anglais donc je voudrais savoir si quelqu'un peut me faire les corrections nécessaire, merci d'avance !
Dear Sir, Dear Madam,
I'm a student in 3rd year in school X in X. I am in European Section since two year. And I would like to join the European section in X next year.
I would integrate European Section because I like English culture, and simply England and I find that interesting. I would take this opportunity seriously and I want also to improve my accent and enrich my vocabulary. I think the European class will allow me to become fluent.
Nowadays, too most many people's know how to speak English, it's the international language. We hear English everywhere : in a music, in a television series...
I travelled in Scotland ( Edinburgh exactly ) last year. I was in a English family, and it's a very good experience. Now I speak by letter with an Canadian with my classe of European Section. And in my English classe, with an English girl's.
I have a professional project and I know learning English will give me a skill for my future career. My project is to work in humanitarian in particular as a pediatrician in a country as Africa.
I hope you will give a positive reponse to my request.
Best regards.
Message de aligeois posté le 03-06-2012 à 16:56:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, je dois faire une lettre de motivation pour intégrer la seconde européenne l'année prochaine et pour rendre mieux, je l'ai faite en anglais donc je voudrais savoir si quelqu'un peut me faire les corrections nécessaire, merci d'avance !
Dear Sir, Dear Madam,
I'm a student in 3rd year in school X in X. I am in European Section since two year. And I would like to join the European section in X next year.
I would integrate European Section because I like English culture, and simply England and I find that interesting. I would take this opportunity seriously and I want also to improve my accent and enrich my vocabulary. I think the European class will allow me to become fluent.
Nowadays, too most many people's know how to speak English, it's the international language. We hear English everywhere : in a music, in a television series...
I travelled in Scotland ( Edinburgh exactly ) last year. I was in a English family, and it's a very good experience. Now I speak by letter with an Canadian with my classe of European Section. And in my English classe, with an English girl's.
I have a professional project and I know learning English will give me a skill for my future career. My project is to work in humanitarian in particular as a pediatrician in a country as Africa.
I hope you will give a positive reponse to my request.
Best regards.
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