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Message de mar4gaux posté le 03-06-2012 à 11:27:27 (S | E | F)
Bonjour;
Suite a mon premier post j'ai rajouté une brochure à mon devoir. Je me demandais si vous pouviez la corriger, s'il vous plait.
Je mets mon texte en dessous.
Merci d'avance. Bon dimanche et bonne fête des mères.
1ere page:
TRAVEL TO
SAN
FRANCISCO
WITH SFA
San Francisco or the city by the bay in summer. An agency that help you for find a flights, an hotel and all attractions for happy vacations.
Together with Expidia and Viator.
2eme page:
THE ATTRACTIONS
With the «Card Go San Francisco» come discover the wonderful city by the bay. The Golden Gate Bridge, fisherman's wharf, Alcatraz Island, Muir Woods and the Coit Tower await you.
3eme page:
THE NIGHTS
The fabulous theater of San Francisco, gives you every nights of wonderful performances.
Come dance in the nightclub «The End Up».
4eme page:
THE FLIGHTS
With the best company, travel across the USA. US AIRWAYS takes you to San Fransisco for a flight direct or not. You have to choose your options.
5eme page:
THE HOTEL
«Petite Auberge» is no doubt the most comfortable hotel. Situated in the central of San Francisco but not too big, it is next to bus station.
6eme page:
City map:
Price:
From $ 2700 per person.
Do not wait, go!
Merci encore à vous.
PS: c'est pour demain.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-06-2012 11:33
Message de mar4gaux posté le 03-06-2012 à 11:27:27 (S | E | F)
Bonjour;
Suite a mon premier post j'ai rajouté une brochure à mon devoir. Je me demandais si vous pouviez la corriger, s'il vous plait.
Je mets mon texte en dessous.
Merci d'avance. Bon dimanche et bonne fête des mères.
1ere page:
TRAVEL TO
SAN
FRANCISCO
WITH SFA
San Francisco or the city by the bay in summer. An agency that help you for find a flights, an hotel and all attractions for happy vacations.
Together with Expidia and Viator.
2eme page:
THE ATTRACTIONS
With the «Card Go San Francisco» come discover the wonderful city by the bay. The Golden Gate Bridge, fisherman's wharf, Alcatraz Island, Muir Woods and the Coit Tower await you.
3eme page:
THE NIGHTS
The fabulous theater of San Francisco, gives you every nights of wonderful performances.
Come dance in the nightclub «The End Up».
4eme page:
THE FLIGHTS
With the best company, travel across the USA. US AIRWAYS takes you to San Fransisco for a flight direct or not. You have to choose your options.
5eme page:
THE HOTEL
«Petite Auberge» is no doubt the most comfortable hotel. Situated in the central of San Francisco but not too big, it is next to bus station.
6eme page:
City map:
Price:
From $ 2700 per person.
Do not wait, go!
Merci encore à vous.
PS: c'est pour demain.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-06-2012 11:33
Réponse: Brochure/San Francisco de bluestar, postée le 03-06-2012 à 16:07:53 (S | E)
1ere page:
TRAVEL TO
SAN
FRANCISCO
WITH SFA
San Francisco or the cCity bBy tThe bBay in summer. An agency that help you for to find a flights, an hotel and all attractions for happy vacations.
Together with Expeidia and Viator.
2eme page:
THE ATTRACTIONS
With the «Card Go San Francisco» come discover the wonderful city by the bay. City By The Bay The Golden Gate Bridge, Ffisherman's wWharf, Alcatraz Island, Muir Woods and the Coit Tower await you.
3eme page:
THE NIGHTS
The fabulous theaterre of San Francisco, gives you every nights of wonderful performances every night. Come dance in the nightclub «The End Up».
4eme page:
THE FLIGHTS
With the best company, travel across the USA. US AIRWAYS takes you to San Fransisco for a flight direct or not. You have to choose your options.
5eme page:
THE HOTEL
«Petite Auberge» is no doubt the most comfortable hotel. Situated in the central of San Francisco but not too big, it is next to bus station.
6eme page:
City map:
Price:
From $ 2700 per person.
Do not wait, go!
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Modifié par bluestar le 03-06-2012 16:09
Réponse: Brochure/San Francisco de mar4gaux, postée le 03-06-2012 à 16:31:39 (S | E)
Thank you so much Bluestar
Réponse: Brochure/San Francisco de bluestar, postée le 03-06-2012 à 18:04:52 (S | E)
Situated in the central centre of San Francisco
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