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Correction/transport
Message de abdousd1 posté le 28-04-2012 à 23:15:36 (S | E | F)
Hello,

I have this paragraph,could you please correct me:
In our life, there are many means of transport and each one of us prefer a mean (plane, car, bus....)for me the car is the best one. First it's fast and quick (his speed is higher than 200 km/h)for example we can travel a long distance like 300km in two hour only.
Moreover ,it's comfortable..we can drive it easily without any difficult.
In conclusion, the car is the best mean it has all what you need to travel.

Thank you for your help.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-04-2012 23:17

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Réponse: Correction/transport de sherry48, postée le 29-04-2012 à 00:02:26 (S | E)
Hello.
In our life (plural/singular), there are many means of transport 1 and each one of us prefer 1 a mean (plane, car, bus....)for me the car is the best one. First it's fast and quick 2(his speed is higher than 200 km/h)for example, we can travel a long distance like 300km in two hour only.3
Moreover ,it's comfortable..we can drive it easily without any difficult. (adjective-use a noun--these 2 are really 1 reason)
In conclusion, the car is the best mean it has all what you need to travel.

1 These are generally verb forms. Use a noun.
2 Fast and quick mean the same, so I wouldn't write both words here.
3 wrong place

I hope this helps. Sherry

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