Correction / my future

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Correction / my future
Message de qui posté le 15-04-2012 à 10:40:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !!!!

je souhaiterais que quelqu'un me dise si ce texte de ma composition est correct s'il vous plaît.
Merci pour vos réponses.

le sujet est : "How do you see your future?"

Later, I would like to have no children but to get married to a beautiful, intelligent, sportive man and who loves me.
I would like to be a lawyer because I like returning the justice and I think it’s a beautiful job.
My house should be gigantic, with a big swimming pool and a big soft sofa. There will be any pets but I would like to have a ground in South Africa with elephants, giraffes, zebras, buffaloes...
I would like to go there on holidays but also in China, Canada, India, Australia and many other countries…

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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-04-2012 11:39

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Réponse: Correction / my future de bluestar, postée le 15-04-2012 à 16:15:50 (S | E)

Bonjour..

Later, When I am older I would like to have no children but to get married to a beautiful, intelligent, sportive sports-loving man and who loves me.
I would like to be a lawyer because I like returning seeing justice served and I think it’s a beautiful job.
My house should be gigantic, with a big swimming pool and a big soft sofa. There will be many pets but I would like to have a ground park in South Africa with elephants, giraffes, zebras, buffaloes...
I would like to go there on holidays but also into China, Canada, India, Australia and many other countries…

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Réponse: Correction / my future de qui, postée le 17-04-2012 à 08:21:47 (S | E)
thank you !!

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