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Message de liu1983 posté le 08-04-2012 à 01:09:25 (S | E | F)
Hello everybody,
I wrote a cover letter and I would like to have your advice please.
Did you see many mistakes?
Is it a good letter?
Thank you for your advice and tips...
A.K
I am writing to you about your advertisement. Improving customer satisfaction allows getting their loyalty. Your customer service listens to the needs and offers a quality service. To assist you in your chore will be an opportunity which urges me to send you my application.
Few months ago, I had an experience as a ticketing executive. I prepared a subscriber campaign 2011-2012. My mission made advertising supports and sure products sale. Thanks to first task, the sales target was exceeded. Thanks to second task, I made sure advices by phone and by mail.
I have been developing my professional abilities, in particular, negotiation skills. It is likely this ability, which is important for this application. My CV proves that my profile is resourceful. I am able to take part marketing and communication chores. My ambition is to become an international businessman.
Are you interested? With great pleasure, I will be available to meet you.
Best regards,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-04-2012 09:01
Message de liu1983 posté le 08-04-2012 à 01:09:25 (S | E | F)
Hello everybody,
I wrote a cover letter and I would like to have your advice please.
Did you see many mistakes?
Is it a good letter?
Thank you for your advice and tips...
A.K
I am writing to you about your advertisement. Improving customer satisfaction allows getting their loyalty. Your customer service listens to the needs and offers a quality service. To assist you in your chore will be an opportunity which urges me to send you my application.
Few months ago, I had an experience as a ticketing executive. I prepared a subscriber campaign 2011-2012. My mission made advertising supports and sure products sale. Thanks to first task, the sales target was exceeded. Thanks to second task, I made sure advices by phone and by mail.
I have been developing my professional abilities, in particular, negotiation skills. It is likely this ability, which is important for this application. My CV proves that my profile is resourceful. I am able to take part marketing and communication chores. My ambition is to become an international businessman.
Are you interested? With great pleasure, I will be available to meet you.
Best regards,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-04-2012 09:01
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