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Message de candou posté le 22-02-2012 à 12:37:03 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai une lettre de motivation à rédiger en anglais pour une mobilité à l'étranger. Pourriez-vous m'aider à la corrigersvp s'il vous plaît?
Merci d'avance :-)
For the attention of Mr. LLL,
Responsible for the mobility program in Cardiff
Subject: Application for the mobility program 2012-2013 in Cardiff
Sir,
Currently a second year student in Licence LEA, I apply for an Erasmus departure to the University of Cardiff for the school year 2012-2013.
The opportunity to study at a British university is a great chance to improve my level of English. Indeed, it is necessary to master this language today, especially in the domain of international trade.
Many schools offering Masters specialized in international trade value students who have studied abroad. I am very interested by Masters such as those offered by schools of TUNON or of ISTELI and I think that having studied in an Anglophone country could gave me a quality experience that I could valorize. This new horizons seems also essential for personal enrichment to best meet the requirements of the workplace.
Knowing people who studied at Cardiff, I was able to inform on the progress of an academic year in this country, and this only intensified my motivation.
My openness and my adaptability will allow me to immerse myself in that environment and build relationships with students from other backgrounds. Being an autonomous person, I think also able to meet all contingencies that may occur during a year abroad.
I look forward hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-02-2012 13:01
Message de candou posté le 22-02-2012 à 12:37:03 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai une lettre de motivation à rédiger en anglais pour une mobilité à l'étranger. Pourriez-vous m'aider à la corriger
Merci d'avance :-)
For the attention of Mr. LLL,
Responsible for the mobility program in Cardiff
Subject: Application for the mobility program 2012-2013 in Cardiff
Sir,
Currently a second year student in Licence LEA, I apply for an Erasmus departure to the University of Cardiff for the school year 2012-2013.
The opportunity to study at a British university is a great chance to improve my level of English. Indeed, it is necessary to master this language today, especially in the domain of international trade.
Many schools offering Masters specialized in international trade value students who have studied abroad. I am very interested by Masters such as those offered by schools of TUNON or of ISTELI and I think that having studied in an Anglophone country could gave me a quality experience that I could valorize. This new horizons seems also essential for personal enrichment to best meet the requirements of the workplace.
Knowing people who studied at Cardiff, I was able to inform on the progress of an academic year in this country, and this only intensified my motivation.
My openness and my adaptability will allow me to immerse myself in that environment and build relationships with students from other backgrounds. Being an autonomous person, I think also able to meet all contingencies that may occur during a year abroad.
I look forward hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-02-2012 13:01
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